THE PEACEMAKER SLEPT

The sun is up, the sun is yellow, shining bright.
Reflection of chrome, pointed nowhere in particular.
Where there should be peace, it’s high noon.
A breakdown in communication, shrieking bars.

Reflection of chrome, pointed nowhere in particular,
until an itching trigger finger got caught in its snare.
A breakdown in communication, shrieking bars,
teeth bared between tumbleweed growth on worn face.

Until an itching trigger finger got caught in its snare,
the peacemaker slept with his stetson over good eye.
Teeth bared, between tumbleweed growth on worn face,
an enemy with a singular task approaches his foe.

The peacemaker slept with his stetson over good eye,
a scarred patch could see past the dusty row.
An enemy, with a singular task, approaches his foe,
notorious with two-fisted cannons to smoke him.

A scarred patch could see past the dusty row,
his hearing, respectable - comes recurring nightmare,
notorious with two fisted cannons to smoke him.
A red-tailed hawk tattles on the uncuffed catalyst.

His hearing, respectable - comes recurring nightmare.
Where there should be peace, it’s high noon
A red-tailed hawk tattles on the uncuffed catalyst.
The sun is up, the sun is yellow, shining bright.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Tor Avatar
March 22, 2024 at 11:05 PM
Kim a very difficult style of Poetry that you have mastered. Best wishes for the contest...
Rodrigues Avatar
March 23, 2024 at 7:35 AM
Thank you, Mike! :)
Kauffman Avatar
March 22, 2024 at 10:26 AM
So well done, Kim! I love your rendition of High Noon in pantoum and the metaphor, peacemaker, is so creative! If this is for a contest, blest wishes. Blessings!
Rodrigues Avatar
March 23, 2024 at 7:36 AM
No contest. Just for fun!
Mo Avatar
March 22, 2024 at 10:09 AM
This is so well done Kim!. A fav
Rodrigues Avatar
March 23, 2024 at 7:36 AM
Thank you so much!
Buhagiar Avatar
March 22, 2024 at 4:14 AM
A great pantoum not easy to write as I well know. Perfect imagery throughout. Great talent. Hugs.
Rodrigues Avatar
March 23, 2024 at 7:36 AM
I so appreciate you and your encouragement, Victor!
Hind Avatar
March 21, 2024 at 7:31 PM
It seems as if the foe cannot burn him. Even as it's creeping up to get him, he still sees it coming. The sun is shining on it all- brighter than anything. Hmmm...I love this form, and you did it justice. Hats off, gal, to your talents. <3 xx hugs
Rodrigues Avatar
March 23, 2024 at 7:37 AM
Hugs-a-million, Paige! :)
Dome Avatar
March 21, 2024 at 1:49 PM
An incredible work of art. Your talent abounds. A visual feast, a joy to read.well done. Pete.
Rodrigues Avatar
March 23, 2024 at 7:38 AM
Thank you, Pete! :)
One Avatar
March 21, 2024 at 12:46 PM
Hey Kim, your captures the essence of a classic Western showdown, weaving together vivid imagery, compelling characters, and a sense of foreboding to create a gripping narrative that transports the reader to the dusty plains of the frontier...
Rodrigues Avatar
March 23, 2024 at 7:38 AM
ahh…thank you so much, my friend! :)
Goldsmith Avatar
March 21, 2024 at 11:44 AM
What a story/write. Great Ending.....Have blessed day writing away................
Rodrigues Avatar
March 21, 2024 at 11:53 AM
So glad you liked it! We sharpen each other on PS! God bless you, sweet friend!
Rodgers Avatar
March 21, 2024 at 11:36 AM
Dear Kim, Such a tense Western scene, where the silence before the storm is palpable. The imagery of the sun, the chrome, and the peacemaker's stoic stance creates a gripping atmosphere of impending conflict. Kim it's a powerful reflection on the fragility of peace and the inevitability of violence in a lawless land. - Blessings, Daniel
Rodrigues Avatar
March 21, 2024 at 11:52 AM
Thank you so much, Daniel! You always have a great and impactful compact. Hugs ~ Kim
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