The Pathless Path

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descent and ascent atop the Ferris wheel at all times fully present enhances our zest and zeal all doings are being done although we’re not the doer step by step we come undone discarding delusions of grandeur ceasing to weigh and size we breathe in quiet surrender in timeless time as we vaporise each life pulse is beheld in wonder 04-January-2023

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 1/6/2023 11:17:00 AM

A wonderful write and so very true. Have a blessed day/weekend...............

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 1/6/2023 7:01:00 PM

Thanks, Paula :)

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 1/4/2023 11:23:00 AM

Hello Unseeking Seeker, I enjoy the the Ferris Wheel. The only ride i go on at the amusement park. Enjoy your day my friend. Blessings my friend. /Darlene

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/5/2023 7:40:00 AM

Hello Unseeking Seeker Yes i believe this to be true. It could be the high makes us happy, and the lows makes us sad. This makes a lot of sense to me. Enjoy your day my friend. Blessings my friend./Darlene

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 1/4/2023 6:43:00 PM

Life is a Ferris wheel too but strangely we like the highs, not the lows