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The Past Is Past

As bleak as a rose amid a tangle. 
Over wilted bloomy, with dew sprinkle. 
It occurs as entire face with no grin.
It's about wishing to be without sin. 

Blue feelings, sorrow, and a sense of rage.
Like a ship laid amid waves, owned by age.
Like a rainbow, I am lost needing you.
After the tide, the sky takes on bold hue.

Ignore the tweak escape from yesterday.
Follow your dreams and reconcile your ray. 
A new day was breaking the horizon. 
I sought my way once the dawning brightens.  

Sway in the rain, interact with each rife.
Regain your young virtue and seize your life.

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Christuraj Alex March 13, 2022 at 5:19 AM A very beautiful sonnet. Congratulations!

Richard Evans February 8, 2022 at 10:36 PM Wow. Great, great verse. This poem made me feel. Can't ask for more from poetry than that.

Bill Baker February 8, 2022 at 4:55 PM Great imagery and emotion in this one, Lasaad. We must all re-energize an accept the new day with all we have in us. Each is a miracle waiting to be enjoyed. Blessings, Bill

Sam Kauffman February 8, 2022 at 12:08 PM "As bleak as a rose amid a tangle" - just one of your many vividly written, and memorable, pictures in this sonnet that seizes hope and hangs on for the ride Lasaad! Thank you for sharing this gem. Blessings.

Paula Goldsmith February 8, 2022 at 11:42 AM Your write "The Past Is Past" is so true. A pretty picture with the new day. The best time of the day. Have a blessed day.............

Demetrios Trifiatis February 8, 2022 at 5:06 AM An explosion of beauty and poetic exclamation, dearest, Lasaad. Blessings.

Vijay Pandit February 8, 2022 at 4:46 AM Much hope and inspiration you convey through your words, Lasaad. No point dwelling in the past.

Eve Roper February 7, 2022 at 10:47 PM Beautiful verse, Lasaad, sad , but a great poem.

Valsa George February 7, 2022 at 9:46 PM Forget the past and its mistakes, Regain your youthful vigor and seize every opportunity. A new day is dawning . A sonnet of hope, also very inspiring !