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As bleak as a rose amid a tangle. Over wilted bloomy, with dew sprinkle. It occurs as entire face with no grin. It's about wishing to be without sin. Blue feelings, sorrow, and a sense of rage. Like a ship laid amid waves, owned by age. Like a rainbow, I am lost needing you. After the tide, the sky takes on bold hue. Ignore the tweak escape from yesterday. Follow your dreams and reconcile your ray. A new day was breaking the horizon. I sought my way once the dawning brightens. Sway in the rain, interact with each rife. Regain your young virtue and seize your life.
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Date: 3/13/2022 5:19:00 AM
A very beautiful sonnet. Congratulations!
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Date: 2/8/2022 10:36:00 PM
Wow. Great, great verse. This poem made me feel. Can't ask for more from poetry than that.
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Date: 2/8/2022 4:55:00 PM
Great imagery and emotion in this one, Lasaad. We must all re-energize an accept the new day with all we have in us. Each is a miracle waiting to be enjoyed. Blessings, Bill
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Date: 2/8/2022 12:08:00 PM
"As bleak as a rose amid a tangle" - just one of your many vividly written, and memorable, pictures in this sonnet that seizes hope and hangs on for the ride Lasaad! Thank you for sharing this gem. Blessings.
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Date: 2/8/2022 11:42:00 AM
Your write "The Past Is Past" is so true. A pretty picture with the new day. The best time of the day. Have a blessed day.............
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Date: 2/8/2022 5:06:00 AM
An explosion of beauty and poetic exclamation, dearest, Lasaad. Blessings.
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Date: 2/8/2022 4:46:00 AM
Much hope and inspiration you convey through your words, Lasaad. No point dwelling in the past.
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Date: 2/7/2022 10:47:00 PM
Beautiful verse, Lasaad, sad , but a great poem.
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Date: 2/7/2022 9:46:00 PM
Forget the past and its mistakes, Regain your youthful vigor and seize every opportunity. A new day is dawning . A sonnet of hope, also very inspiring !
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