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The Past and Me, Entwine

My life has been a tangled path full of death and pain, I have lost everyone that I love, they are just names; Engraved in stone and those left, I seldom hear from, I got tired of being the one to call long, long ago. Of course, if I could change my past there are parts, That I would keep, like my true love and my baby boy; And my parents and I would still have my big sister, But, life is what it is meant to be, no one is forever. God controls who lives and who goes to be with Him, So, I accept all that but having said all this, I must say; All that grief and sadness has made me a dark poet, A poet must suffer and my life story is called Tears. I stand before you to say except for those deaths, There is not one thing I would change about my journey; It all had a purpose, even my near death experience, Once you have stood at the gates, you are changed. So, although often I hang my head like a dying rose, I accept my past for what it is, the sad and the happy; And with the pain came an inner strength fathomless, So, the past and me entwine and journey together. ________________________________ July 24, 2016 Poetry/Narrative/The Past and ME, Entwine Copyright Protected, ID 07-811-407-24 All Rights Reserved, 2016, Constance La France For the Standard contest, Change My Past sponsor, Nayda Ivette Negron, Judged 08/2016 First Place

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Date: 7/30/2016 1:22:00 PM
Congrats on your 1st place win. Well said, we are stronger with the challenges of life. :) Sunita
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Date: 7/30/2016 12:46:00 PM
Congrats on your superb win, hugs Cloudy Poet
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Date: 7/30/2016 9:18:00 AM
The last line touched me most. Also I highly appreciate your comment ' Thank you Past for the lessons . I am ready for Future.' Congrats B.O. to win Top Place.
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Date: 7/29/2016 6:39:00 PM
You my dear are a wonderful poet, congrats on the win.
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Date: 7/29/2016 6:23:00 PM
To-the-point, sincere, honest feelings. Very nice, B. W. Suggestion: Stanza three, line one: change him to Him. Congrats on your win. :-)
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Date: 7/29/2016 4:39:00 PM
Hi BW, You have penned such a hearfelt write. I feel like you poured your heart into every word. The last line "So, the past and me entwine and journey together " was so powerful. Our past the good as well as the bad made us become who we are today. Congratulations on your 1st place win. It was well deserved: -) Alexis
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Date: 7/29/2016 4:33:00 PM
Sad, heartwrenching, and but so beautifully written as always, Broken Wings. Congratulations on your First Place win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 7/29/2016 3:48:00 PM
Congratulations Constance on the first placement of the contest.
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