The Passions of Love

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my sister co wrote this with me for her husbands birthday

Everything shining within darkness always holds purity the innocence of light forever shines Irresistible radiant heat glowing warmly walks with you hand in hand Strolling across golden sands touching blue waves giving oneself to the one whom loves like no other footprints remain Tasting sweetness passions kiss Eden's fruit embraced with you lasts a lifetime Dreams come true as beauty submits inside weakness gently mixed with kindness with the one and only you unrhymed couplet co written by Maria Mc Laughlin and Liam Mc Daid

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Edz Roxas

Date: 4/26/2015 11:19:00 PM

Absolutely brilliant and passionate! \m/

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 4/26/2015 6:14:00 PM

Hi Liam and Maria!Another very beautiful dazzling love poem penned by you my dearest friend Liam and this time again in collaboration with your dear sister Maria.Sending you my love Maria:)The whole piece is so very romantic loving,sweet filled of so much love,passion and tenderness.Awesome!smiling.Very beautifully written.I enjoyed it!A great collaboration.You're very creative and talented Maria:)A very big 7+++to each of you!Your pens are truly mighty golden.Wishing you a very lovely day!In his light!God bless you always!:)Love and hugs!xoxox D.^O^

D. C.

Date: 4/26/2015 5:50:00 PM

Introspective..food for thought.