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The Passion of a Jue Ju

the sultry masquerade of night kindles a vibrant, fevered blush lust unchecked by daylight’s grace blooms blissfully in gloaming’s trance David Mohn THE PASSION OF A JUE JU Contest 25 Jul 2014

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Date: 8/6/2014 5:40:00 PM
Wow David stunning..congrats on the win
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Date: 8/5/2014 7:02:00 PM
Wonderfully written and well placed winner! Many grats! :)
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Date: 8/4/2014 8:40:00 PM
Congrats on your 1st place Win!!
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Date: 8/4/2014 6:35:00 PM
Love the masquerade reference. Well done.
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Date: 8/4/2014 4:53:00 PM
Summer's heat, summer's fever, subtle passion......however one chooses to read! Love it !!
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Date: 8/4/2014 4:25:00 PM
Very good words in this one. A well crafted passion poem. Congrats to you!!
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Date: 8/4/2014 7:36:00 AM
Wonderfully crafted passionate write, david
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Date: 8/4/2014 7:00:00 AM
Lovely passionate Jue Ju ! Congrats on first place win!
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Date: 8/4/2014 4:40:00 AM
Passionate winning Jue Ju ..Way to go..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 8/3/2014 12:22:00 PM
dropping back with my congrats:-) Hugs Jan xxx
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Date: 7/28/2014 4:25:00 AM
Excellent write, David. Kindles the imagination. gl in contest. // paul
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Date: 8/4/2014 9:45:00 AM
Hi Dave...back with merited congratulations for placing first in the contest!
Date: 7/25/2014 3:32:00 PM
great write. Good luck in the contest, Hugs jan xx
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Date: 7/25/2014 2:40:00 PM
I think this is good! I cant get a handle on this contest.. I really like the third line. BG
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