David Mohn Poet Jueju

The Passion of a Jue Ju

the sultry masquerade of night
kindles a vibrant, fevered blush
lust unchecked by daylight’s grace
blooms blissfully in gloaming’s trance

David Mohn
THE PASSION OF A JUE JU Contest
25 Jul 2014

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Tim Smith August 6, 2014 at 5:40 PM Wow David stunning..congrats on the win

Casarah Nance August 5, 2014 at 7:02 PM Wonderfully written and well placed winner! Many grats! :)

Robert Lindley August 4, 2014 at 8:40 PM Congrats on your 1st place Win!!

John Lawless August 4, 2014 at 6:35 PM Love the masquerade reference. Well done.

Carrie Richards August 4, 2014 at 4:53 PM Summer's heat, summer's fever, subtle passion......however one chooses to read! Love it !!

Andrea Dietrich August 4, 2014 at 4:25 PM Very good words in this one. A well crafted passion poem. Congrats to you!!

Dr.Ram Mehta August 4, 2014 at 7:36 AM Wonderfully crafted passionate write, david

Dr. Upma A. Sharma August 4, 2014 at 7:00 AM Lovely passionate Jue Ju ! Congrats on first place win!

Sara Kendrick August 4, 2014 at 4:40 AM Passionate winning Jue Ju ..Way to go..Congrats..Sara

Jan Allison August 3, 2014 at 12:22 PM dropping back with my congrats:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Paul Callus July 28, 2014 at 4:25 AM Excellent write, David. Kindles the imagination. gl in contest. // paul Paul Callus August 4, 2014 at 9:45 AM Hi Dave...back with merited congratulations for placing first in the contest!

Jan Allison July 25, 2014 at 3:32 PM great write. Good luck in the contest, Hugs jan xx

Barbara Gorelick July 25, 2014 at 2:40 PM I think this is good! I cant get a handle on this contest.. I really like the third line. BG