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All I ever wanted was to pass... one night or even just a moment in your presence in your light delirious with delight So just this night or even this moment Let it come to pass... Let me hold you Let me have you All to myself Please... Shut us away where no one can see where no one can hear all that I'm longing to reveal Let me pass this moment in passion's possession in this continuous succession of lovemaking's confession: I want you I've always wanted you, so for one dawnless night or even just for one eternal moment... Let my life pass in the tasting of longed for lips in the trailing of my hands in your hair my desire disrobed, bare This I swear: to you, nothing else can compare Now tell me... tell me, do you dare? My idol My dream My first wish My last need Listen to me... Let caution subside, and hindrances hide Open... Open your arms wide, and let me pass this night this moment here in your arms Hold me... Love me, and I'll gladly pass from this world to the next breath leaving body as reality enacts fantasy I'll pass... Let me pass My last moment in your arms

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Date: 7/31/2023 5:06:00 AM
You my friend are indeed queen of romance, This gem says it all, I am fav'in this one .. God bless you.
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Date: 1/3/2023 5:20:00 PM
All i ever wanted, is everything you wanted. Together the tempest of love. Eileen you are so special, every time on the news, of Beirut i fear of troubles. So pleased to find the city calm, and you within its arms safe. all the best for 2023 Harry
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Date: 10/14/2022 5:36:00 AM
Ooh la la is back. I miss your passionate prose. This is perfectly expressed. Hugs Rick.
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Date: 10/2/2022 6:15:00 AM
A most romantic, captivating offering, dear Eileen...that urgent desire to transform fantasy into reality. It would be great to hear you recite it! ~ Welcome back, my friend...hugs // paul
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Date: 10/2/2022 2:22:00 AM
It's been a long time since we crossed paths. You delivered a lovely romantic poem. Your imagery and emotion are of the highest level.
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Date: 10/1/2022 8:13:00 AM
Very romantic and passionate Eileen. Linda
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Date: 9/30/2022 3:34:00 AM
Dear Soupers...thanks for the visits. Due to major constraints of time, I've decided to respond to your comments by visitng your work. I can no longer post here AND visit and post a comment. I read all the comments, though and am ever grateful. Life has been a bit overwhelming lately.
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Date: 9/27/2022 9:03:00 AM
- A super romantic poem, Eileen - Beautifully written ... as always :) - hugs
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Date: 9/27/2022 7:34:00 AM
WoW! Eileen, You write passion very well. I found it to be sensual and erotic. I could go on and on about this passionate write. I recall you being the queen of romance( or something like that) on the soup. I have missed your presence here. It’s good to you posting again. Have a nice day-Alexis
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Date: 9/26/2022 2:10:00 PM
I'm in...who could refuse such an ardent, magnificent offer. Magical urges arrive in the still of the night. Wonderful, Miss Manassian. :o)
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Date: 9/25/2022 11:02:00 PM
The Queen of romance strikes again! Lovely!!!!
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Date: 9/27/2022 7:36:00 AM
I didn't see this when I wrote my comment. She most definitely is the “ Queen of romance!
Date: 9/25/2022 5:52:00 PM
WOW!!! Eileen, this took me to so many places at so many times and left me wanting.......Beautifully done
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