The Passing

The velvet sky was strangely quiet...
    The Earth still and hushed beneath my feet.
No mountains groaned, no crumbling stone
    Giving voice to my defeat.
The lake... calm and placid like mirrored glass...
    Not a ripple to be seen.
Two loons at play had flown away
    Leaving a tranquil pastoral scene.

Birds would sing to mark this day
    As beasts roamed throughout the land.
I was not impressed and most distressed...
    Nature's laws seemed well in hand.
The morning scented with a familiar air as
    Meadow flowers made good their vivid fashion
But in my grief, there was a unyielding belief...
    Nature should be gripped with far more passion.

I wanted Earthly reprisals and thunderbolts
    To lash out their.. mournful roar.
I wanted winds to squall and towered trees to fall
    And huge white capped waves to lap their shores.
I wanted the land to wither and blow away
    Where wilted crops grow stunted for the year.
Where the force above... feels a desperate shove
    And an unplumbed chasm then appears.

But then again... on further musing,
    Such sights would not honor her at all.
We had oft discussed... there be no fuss
    When she answered Heaven's call.
No trumpets roared or melodic lyres blurred
    As a callous Nature missed that special day...
But Church bells rang and sweet Angelic voices sang...
    When my dear Mother passed away.

                       The End

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 3/22/2021 9:29:00 PM
I just read this outstanding poem today in the PS:It’s Poetry book. I was blown away by its brilliance; every line was finely crafted and so moving..elegant and touching. This beauty is a huge FAVE! Thank you, David! :)
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Date: 2/6/2021 8:01:00 PM
So glad to find this beautiful poem published in the 2020 PS Anthology ~ fabulous last stanza, David
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Date: 11/2/2020 4:24:00 PM
Heart rendering and moving David. A beautiful write. Linda
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Date: 9/4/2020 7:18:00 AM
David, oh this is touching. Such a masterpiece, Pangiexx
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Date: 8/22/2020 6:32:00 PM
My deepest condolences on your loss David, Peace and Blessings..
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Date: 8/16/2020 8:28:00 PM
Written straight from the heart, with such a poetic touch. May you know no more sorrow, David. Only additions from now on; no subtractions... Mom's the toughest loss. May you grieve, come to terms with her passing, and ease back into the flow of life. God bless, Gershon
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Date: 8/16/2020 5:44:00 PM
David, The Passing, masterfully written and so well conceived. I wondered if you were shaking a fist at Nature with use of a capitalized first letter N. Very witty, yet tender tribute for one so dear. Your poem evoked a response, and even commanded it would be so, but in the gentlest way possible. -Richard
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Date: 8/10/2020 4:12:00 PM
G'day David ... very good as usual David. I guess within the mind at a sad time like you wrote, the earth appears violent in your torment, when all around you very little changes - thank you David - Lindsay
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David Mchattie
Date: 8/12/2020 12:31:00 PM
You nailed my poem perfectly. When my Mother passed, I expected some rumble from nature. I was being silly, I suppose. Have a great day.
Date: 8/9/2020 1:30:00 PM
Aww David i am far more used to reading your humourous poems, this is so beautiful in its sadness. Hugs jan xx
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David Mchattie
Date: 8/12/2020 12:28:00 PM
Thanks for the visit. I have a small fascination with death. If it was a bad thing, everyone wouldn't do it. Stay well my friend.
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