Get Your Premium Membership

The Passing

The velvet sky was strangely quiet... The Earth still and hushed beneath my feet. No mountains groaned, no crumbling stone Giving voice to my defeat. The lake... calm and placid like mirrored glass... Not a ripple to be seen. Two loons at play had flown away Leaving a tranquil pastoral scene. Birds would sing to mark this day As beasts roamed throughout the land. I was not impressed and most distressed... Nature's laws seemed well in hand. The morning scented with a familiar air as Meadow flowers made good their vivid fashion But in my grief, there was a unyielding belief... Nature should be gripped with far more passion. I wanted Earthly reprisals and thunderbolts To lash out their.. mournful roar. I wanted winds to squall and towered trees to fall And huge white capped waves to lap their shores. I wanted the land to wither and blow away Where wilted crops grow stunted for the year. Where the force above... feels a desperate shove And an unplumbed chasm then appears. But then again... on further musing, Such sights would not honor her at all. We had oft discussed... there be no fuss When she answered Heaven's call. No trumpets roared or melodic lyres blurred As a callous Nature missed that special day... But Church bells rang and sweet Angelic voices sang... When my dear Mother passed away. The End

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 3/22/2021 9:29:00 PM
I just read this outstanding poem today in the PS:It’s Poetry book. I was blown away by its brilliance; every line was finely crafted and so moving..elegant and touching. This beauty is a huge FAVE! Thank you, David! :)
Login to Reply
Date: 2/6/2021 8:01:00 PM
So glad to find this beautiful poem published in the 2020 PS Anthology ~ fabulous last stanza, David
Login to Reply
Date: 11/2/2020 4:24:00 PM
Heart rendering and moving David. A beautiful write. Linda
Login to Reply
Date: 9/4/2020 7:18:00 AM
David, oh this is touching. Such a masterpiece, Pangiexx
Login to Reply
Date: 8/22/2020 6:32:00 PM
My deepest condolences on your loss David, Peace and Blessings..
Login to Reply
Date: 8/16/2020 8:28:00 PM
Written straight from the heart, with such a poetic touch. May you know no more sorrow, David. Only additions from now on; no subtractions... Mom's the toughest loss. May you grieve, come to terms with her passing, and ease back into the flow of life. God bless, Gershon
Login to Reply
Date: 8/16/2020 5:44:00 PM
David, The Passing, masterfully written and so well conceived. I wondered if you were shaking a fist at Nature with use of a capitalized first letter N. Very witty, yet tender tribute for one so dear. Your poem evoked a response, and even commanded it would be so, but in the gentlest way possible. -Richard
Login to Reply
Date: 8/10/2020 4:12:00 PM
G'day David ... very good as usual David. I guess within the mind at a sad time like you wrote, the earth appears violent in your torment, when all around you very little changes - thank you David - Lindsay
Login to Reply
Mchattie Avatar
David Mchattie
Date: 8/12/2020 12:31:00 PM
You nailed my poem perfectly. When my Mother passed, I expected some rumble from nature. I was being silly, I suppose. Have a great day.
Date: 8/9/2020 1:30:00 PM
Aww David i am far more used to reading your humourous poems, this is so beautiful in its sadness. Hugs jan xx
Login to Reply
Mchattie Avatar
David Mchattie
Date: 8/12/2020 12:28:00 PM
Thanks for the visit. I have a small fascination with death. If it was a bad thing, everyone wouldn't do it. Stay well my friend.

Book: Shattered Sighs