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The Parliament of Gods

‘That’s not my elephant’ bellowed Saturn from his throne He pointed his ringed finger At the spaghetti haired Olympian Jove ‘It’s his creation’, he shouted Jove rose from his jewelled chair And taking the hand of Goddess Ella Bent down and peered from the sky Pointing towards the tiny second graders He smiled and shook his locks Saturn seeing the tiny ones Riding the huge pachyderm Felt his anger abating And passed the bill of rights Onto Jove to create These magnificent beasts For the pure pleasure of seeing A little child smile with glee

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 1/21/2011 9:13:00 AM
Oh, Tahera. This is most wondrous. I hope you keep this one to tell as a story forever. It is such a good poem. Congratulations on your winning honor in the contest. It is very well deserved. Best wishes. Deb
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Date: 1/21/2011 3:30:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Tahera in the "That's Not My Elephant" contest by Matt Caliri. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/20/2011 1:15:00 PM
This positively brilliant poem that adds mythology into the mix deserved a high placement, Tahera. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/20/2011 1:13:00 PM
Congrats Tahera my friend on your wonderful and spectacular win in Matt's contest on the elephant theme.. enjoy your top spot with luv..
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Date: 1/20/2011 12:55:00 PM
Hey this is terrific Tahera. Congratulations!
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Date: 1/20/2011 12:29:00 PM
Many congrats Tahera on your fine win in Matt's crazy contest, but a goodie....:)
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Date: 1/20/2011 8:00:00 AM
Hi Tahera. Congratulations on your fantastic success. Well deserved. Eamon
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Date: 1/20/2011 5:48:00 AM
Congrats on the placement.
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Date: 1/20/2011 4:10:00 AM
Congratulations Tahera on your big win in the contest!Nice imagery--enjoyed.---kashinath
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Date: 12/24/2010 9:34:00 PM
Gud one. Merry Christmas to U & Ur fly. Luv/best wishes......Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 12/23/2010 6:58:00 AM
it's a winner to me! Thanks for all your support! Light & Love Happy Holy Days
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Date: 12/22/2010 12:12:00 AM
wowie, this is really creative, Tahera.I cannot belive how much I am liking this contest!! thanks for this enjoyable post. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 12/21/2010 1:25:00 PM
Just awesome, Tahera!! And another mystery is how a little child's smile can melt a heart of steel! This goes to my Favs. List and I already predict this will be on the Winners' List for the contest! Blessings, peace and joy, always, Audrey
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Date: 12/21/2010 11:29:00 AM
Wonderful entry to the contest with humor flowing, Tahera. Good luck
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Date: 12/21/2010 9:11:00 AM
Beautifully written for the contest,Tahera.Good luck
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Date: 12/20/2010 10:55:00 PM
a great mix of humor and charm, tahera.. lovely; best winning wishes in the contest! huggs, nette
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