The Park

My park to me was not see-saws nor swings
instead, a treasure chest of stranger things.
A marble grave, 1891, well kept
where 'Tiny', estate owner's dog now slept.
The long gone Manor House front Portico
and where the star struck teenage lovers go
holds carvings, some initials, from the past
though in one case someone had left their last.
Script ' E Potts joined navy 1943'
Did such detail writ mean 'remember me'?
So many times I've gazed upon his name
that plea cut deep in stone it's power retains.
His call over the years still engraved there
since boyhood I have offered up a prayer.

The culvert is a concrete tour de force
too tempting for adventurers, of course.
Amphitheatre for screaming, scary,
in heavy rain, tomb for the unwary.
Mill races, lock gates, tunnels, falls and weirs
all testing grounds for our deep darkest fears.
There was no challenge our band could resist
we cocked a snook, and nature raised a fist.
Returning home, triumphant, green with moss,
in trouble, but we didn't give a toss.
The moment was our game and joy the prize,
such treasure blind to all but children's eyes.
Seek us out, the park was where you found us,
Green fields of innocence,  it's magic bound us.

Feb 14th 2016
For contest 'The Park', sponsored by Craig Cornish.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Callus Avatar
February 20, 2016 at 10:18 AM
Your unique take on this theme is indeed magical, Viv. I'd rather have had fun in a place like this than on the swings. You narrate with ability, and you took me along with you...a pleasure to read. ~ Regards // paul
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 16, 2016 at 2:28 AM
This is RICH...rich with wonder Viv and a joy to read. Sure to do well in the contest. #7
Wigley Avatar
February 17, 2016 at 11:16 PM
Thanks Connie, everything nowadays seems to have cushions and padding- all health and safety. Not much left for little adventurers. Viv x
Leiser Avatar
February 14, 2016 at 10:44 PM
What an intriguing park, Viv. Your story telling ability is so well done, it really takes one into your world! GL in the contest :)
Wigley Avatar
February 15, 2016 at 6:59 AM
Thanks, Laura, it has all the usual kid's stuff, but being an old Manor estate there is much history, and much to explore. And, being a kid, it was twice the size it is now I'm a grown-up. Viv x
Inman Avatar
February 14, 2016 at 5:15 PM
Interesting memories, Viv, and an engaging write.
Wigley Avatar
February 15, 2016 at 6:59 AM
Thanks, James, I still get total recall on infrequent visits. Regards, Viv
George   Avatar
February 14, 2016 at 2:20 PM
Wow! I feel like I have been there after reading your very vivid portrait. It has left a lasting image in my mind. Elaine
Wigley Avatar
February 15, 2016 at 7:01 AM
Thanks, Elaine, very kind comments. Viv x
Gorelick Avatar
February 14, 2016 at 1:12 PM
what a wonderful time you must have had..better than any civilized park..haha. BG
Wigley Avatar
February 15, 2016 at 7:01 AM
Too much health and safety nowadays, Barbara, kids can't be kids anymore. Thanks for dropping by, Viv x
Andresen Avatar
February 14, 2016 at 12:44 PM
- All that was exciting and "illegal" ..... curious children - A great writing, Viv - Good luck in the contest - Happy Valentine Day :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Wigley Avatar
February 15, 2016 at 7:02 AM
Much climbing, paddling, almost drowning, cuts and bruises- just an ordinary playday back then, Anne Lise. Takk, Viv x
Lane Avatar
February 14, 2016 at 11:54 AM
Your park sounds like more fun than see-saws and swings. Did you ever look up the name, E. Potts? Your writes are always entertaining, Viv.
Wigley Avatar
February 15, 2016 at 7:03 AM
We've tried a bit of research, since one of my neighbours noticed the inscription and has tried to find out. Will let you know. Thanks for popping by, Lin. Viv x
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