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The Paradiddle of Being:
A Rhythmic Meditation
Pt 1

Daniel Henry Rodgers

 

"What if the cadence of our lives is a drumbeat shaping who we are in every breath and step? In every heartbeat lies a paradiddle a most delicate balance of presence and absence of sound and stillness. Listen deeply this is the song of connection…..a rhythmic meditation on what it means to be alive."  - Poet

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In the beginning was the Single Stroke Roll— left-right, left-right, the primordial heartbeat of existence itself, each alternation a binary choice between being and non-being, the eternal paradiddle of consciousness striking against the drumhead of reality. Listen: the Buzz Roll of morning traffic— ten thousand souls creating multiple bounces against the stretched skin of commuter silence. Each ghost note a rhythmic prayer unheard each accent mark a life crying out: I am here, I matter, count me. The city breathes in shuffle time— that ancient syncopation of hope deferred where every third beat swings wide like a child reaching for a parent's hand— missing by milliseconds, by miles by the mathematics of longing itself. He doesn't know yet— we are the drum. II. We are all practicing our flamacues in isolation— those grace notes bleeding into main strikes the delicate millisecond between intention and impact, between the person we were and the sound we make when we finally connect with something real. In subway tunnels, the half-time feel of exhausted laborers moving through molasses time, their footsteps creating polyrhythms against the four-on-the-floor of industrial progress— each drag, each ruff an improvised elegy for the parts of themselves they've learned to silence. The paradiddle becomes theological: Right-Left-Right-Right— I believe, I doubt, I believe, I believe— but that final repetition always weaker always questioning its own conviction the stick trembling in the grip of faith. Boots thunder obedience— but not all rhythm is consent. III. In hospital rooms, the cross-sticking of IV drips against metal poles creating linear patterns where no two sounds occur simultaneously— life reduced to its most essential rhythm each beat a negotiation with mortality. The dying woman's breath becomes a ratamacue: two quick gasps, then a long exhale— then the paradiddle of her children's sobs— grief learning its own rudimentary patterns the muscle memory of loss written in the ligaments of the heart. But listen closer to the songo of survival— that Cuban fusion where every strike serves multiple purposes, where the snare can be both confession and celebration where the same hands that beat out sorrow can syncopate their way to joy. Skins stretched, tongues stripped— still, we are the drum. IV. The refugee child practices her three-stroke ruff on scavenged cardboard in the camp— each strike naming a country left behind each echo a language dimming in memory— but the rhythm, God—the rhythm endures etched into the double helix of survival. In boardrooms, the trap-pattern hi-hats tick out capitalism’s clockwork greed— wealth subdivided in thirty-second notes compounding faster than compassion can track while the bass drum of basic human need strikes once—muted, overlooked— lost in the downbeat of excess. The old jazz master's hands shake now but still remember the bebop complexities of 1958, when integration meant black hands and white hands finding the same downbeat despite history's best efforts at syncopation. She walks in time with gunfire— but not all rhythm is consent. V. In the delivery room, the breakbeat of contractions building to crescendo— the mother's breath creating drum fills in the spaces between impossible pain until finally—the single stroke of a first cry, the most ancient rhythm announcing itself to a world that has forgotten how to listen. The funeral march becomes a second-line parade— New Orleans wisdom transforming grief into celebration, the corpus of mourners finding the backbeat in goodbye, teaching us that even endings can swing if you know where to place the emphasis of your attention. Their pulses perfect— but not all rhythm is consent. =================== Book 2 is coming.....

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Date: 6/2/2025 9:01:00 PM
Your beautiful poetry, Daniel reminded me of the drum circles at the beach at sundown, it 'such an amazing experience a mish mosh of characters drumming youthful tribal expression, to delve into humanities common primal denominator Beats that impel one to move and enjoyeth abandon at twilight. yes percussion has many names. Enjoyable read which truly comes from within you~
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Daniel Henry Rodgers
Date: 6/4/2025 7:48:00 AM
Dearest Anaya, your memory of drum circles at sundown beautifully captures the spirit I hoped to convey. I love how you see the youthful tribal beats as a primal heartbeat connecting us all with such a perfect reflection of the poem’s core. Your appreciation for the raw, joyous abandon in percussion truly honors the poem’s soul. Grateful for your heartfelt, insightful response and your friendship that always inspires me. Blessings, My Dear Anaya, Daniel
Date: 6/2/2025 2:13:00 AM
Dear daniel, Its so good to hear you read your poem so well, and the way youv woven words here; emanates wisdom and so much understanding and truth which you grasp through learning of so much. I love the way youv written especially "In hospital rooms, the cross-sticking of IV drips against metal poles creating linear patterns where no two sounds occur simultaneously—" speaks volumes! And says so much in just those lines itself! Your metaphors and the poetic techniques used here is truly impressive and impeccable! I can see that you wrote this from your soul, and delivered something from various angles so readers can grasp what youv expressed so sincerely and poetically! Pleasure reading your poem! Sending you light always! Fave this is
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Date: 6/4/2025 7:46:00 AM
Dearest Empress, your words are a special gift and I am grateful to you for listening so closely and for truly feeling the heart of my poem. Your insight into the hospital lines and the way you picked up on the metaphors and poetic techniques mean everything to me. I’m grateful for your wisdom, encouragement, and the light you always send my way. Your friendship inspires me, every time. With love and gratitude, and Light. - Daniel.
Date: 5/30/2025 1:12:00 PM
A fave!
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Date: 5/30/2025 1:11:00 PM
each ghost note a rhythmic prayer unheard each accent mark a life crying out I am here, I matter, count me...I love your drumming words of paradiddle, ratamacue… I believe, I doubt, I believe, I believe— but that final repetition always weaker always questioning its own conviction…So good! A grand writer, hitting just the right note!
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Date: 6/4/2025 7:44:00 AM
Dear Kim, your words strike such a chord and thank you for hearing every ghost note and accent, for feeling the pulse and the doubt woven through my lines. Your love for the drumming language and those paradiddles and ratamacues makes me feel truly understood. I’m deeply grateful for your friendship and your ear for the music in my poetry. Blessings, My Dear Kim, Daniel
Date: 5/30/2025 5:32:00 AM
I think your one of the best poets here Daniel, and I don't say this lightly. Your poetry is amazing, have a great day, filled with more of this !!!!
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Date: 6/4/2025 7:42:00 AM
Deaest Rose, your words truly warm my heart and I thank you for such high praise, especially coming from you, one of my dearest and most cherished poetry friends. I’m so grateful for our creative bond and the joy we find in this art together. Wishing you a day filled with inspiration and beauty, just like your spirit. With love, Daniel.
Date: 5/29/2025 3:21:00 PM
Whoa, this is heavy- full of reactions, my reaction... life and death, mountain climbing memory, itself- well, :)
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Date: 6/4/2025 7:41:00 AM
Dear Paige, your reaction made me smile and thank you for feeling the weight and wildness of it all. Life and death, mountain climbs, memories… you always catch the pulse beneath the words. Grateful for your friendship and the way you read between every line. With warmth and wonder, - Daniel.
Date: 5/29/2025 5:52:00 AM
I agree with Anne, you do write brilliantly, though slightly above our heads at times. Still, the single drumbeats melding into the whole (some 8 billion?) and then back to the one again and the contrast between the excitement of a new life entering the world with the death of a beloved (or famous/infamous) person yet the twist of the festival environment which in itself smacks of excitement and revelry... I could go on and who knows if I'm interpreting correctly but this is what I'm getting
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Date: 6/4/2025 7:39:00 AM
Hello Tom, your feedback is a wild ride in itself and I thank you for diving so deeply and picking up on the drumbeat thread! I love your take on the festival twist and the way you riff on the “life as a drumbeat” idea—Bonham, Peart, or smooth jazz, who knows where we’ll land? Your interpretations always spark new thoughts in me. Grateful for your wit and wisdom, my friend. Blessings, Daniel
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Date: 5/29/2025 5:54:00 AM
Life is a prolonged drumbeat. Whether we'll turn out to be a John Bonham or a Zack Starkey (poor sap) or a Neil Peart or some smooth jazz dude I guess remains to be determined
Date: 5/29/2025 1:41:00 AM
You left me breathless. What a marvellous poem. Your vocabulary is that of a master. Since English is my second language, I cannot match it. A wonderful poem including sound and emotion.
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Date: 6/4/2025 7:37:00 AM
Dear Victor, your words leave me truly humbled and grateful. To hear such praise from you, especially about my vocabulary and the emotions conveyed, means so much. Your honesty about English being your second language only highlights your beautiful appreciation for poetry’s power beyond words. Thank you, dear friend, for your generous heart and support. Daniel
Date: 5/28/2025 9:31:00 PM
I enjoy reading this writing. I can see that the world has become complex in efforts to make life easier. I'd gladly go back 50 years.
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Date: 6/4/2025 7:36:00 AM
Dear Hilda, thank you for taking the time to read and share your thoughts. I’m so glad you enjoyed the writing. The poem definitely touches on those themes! I value your perspective and the wistful longing for simpler times you express. With heartfelt gratitude, Daniel.
Date: 5/28/2025 6:18:00 PM
Dearest Daniel, this is a brilliant write! The New Orleans twist on the funeral march is particularly genius, transforming grief into celebration. The language is masterfully vivid and evocative, like the pulse and beat of life's moments. Cannot wait for pt2!!! You write brilliantly, my dearest friend, I read your short story and I loved it. With love and respect always, Anne
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Date: 6/4/2025 7:34:00 AM
Dearest Anne, your words touched me deeply and I thank you for seeing the heart behind the New Orleans twist and the pulse I aimed for. Your encouragement means the world, especially coming from you, my brilliant, gracious friend. I’m thrilled you loved the story too! Can’t wait to share part two with you. Your love and respect lift me higher every time. With all my gratitude and affection, Daniel.
Date: 5/28/2025 1:45:00 PM
WOW!!! What an amazing write you have here. I Love It. Cannot wait for part 2. I will say it again, you need to be writing books. Have a wonderful/blessed day writing away.............
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Date: 5/28/2025 4:56:00 PM
Dearest Paula, Your excitement and encouragement absolutely made my day and thank you! Knowing you’re eager for part 2 fills me with joy and motivation. Your belief in me means the world, and who knows… maybe books are just around the corner! Grateful beyond words for your support and friendship. Wishing you a wonderful, blessed day too. Daniel

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