The Panorama

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The Panorama Author: Sara Kendrick The view from the porch reveals fall Gray clouds cover morn's sun A cool, damp breeze rustles the leaves As acorns bounce, their life done Joy floods as a new season's here A refreshing change to cool The rest before winter's freeze appears Cold bringing lessons from school Gentle breeze becomes brisk and damp Penetrates aging bones Brings to memory winter's hurt As leaves reach earth's rest zone

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/1/2017 8:21:00 PM

Ahhh same picture but must be a different poem!! Yes, this is one beautiful panorama you have a front row seat for, Sara.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/30/2017 11:54:00 AM

Another lovely scene from your yard--the poem foretells winter's arrival. Prayers for Tommy and the entire family!!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/30/2017 12:06:00 PM

Vijay, Your kind review of my work was encouraging..Thanks for the prayers for God hears them all..Soon we will be in winter but we won't know until we are in it what sort of winter it will be..Sara

Probir Gupta

Date: 9/30/2017 10:23:00 AM

In your beautiful poem we come across a lyrical autumn ...

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/30/2017 10:42:00 AM

Probir, Thanks for the kind review of my work..Your presence at my work is uplifting..Sara

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/30/2017 9:52:00 AM

I want to say thank you for each one who has prayed for us during this time of stress in our lives..Tommy is so much better today and was better also yesterday..I feel that he is healing well and should soon be back to his old self..Sara..Continue to pray for us..