Get Your Premium Membership

The Palace Dance

Chandeliers glow beneath golden cherubs Highlighted arches; adorned the great hall. Paintings of cupids by masters of old, Watched from the ceiling as people stood tall – Debutantes fluttered their lashes and fans. Pastels reflected on floors and shone bright. Shadows of elegance followed each beat. Beautiful dresses adorning the night. Gentlemen lusted as fragrances wafted. Music was muted by instant desire. Sconces on walls softly lit up the room. High cultured guests dressed in formal attire. Lords with their beautiful ladies soon waltzed. Black tails and ties danced a rhythmical pace. Crinolines swirled to the beat of the drum. One, two, three, one, two, three, gliding with grace. Bachelors entered the room through arched doors. Holding their passions impertinently taut. Glancing around at the ladies in white. Acting like gentlemen as they were taught. Courtiers sat on a couch near the door. Necklines, sufficiently high, covered breasts. Sharing their hopes as they giggled and smiled. Lips ripe for kissing remained tightly pressed. Magical moment when two young hearts met, Waltzing to music the orchestra played. There in the palace flirtations began. Dancing all night there, new joys were made. December 2, 2014 Originally Written for Poetry Soup Member Contest: Ballroom Delights Revised (slightly) March 23, 2015 For Poetry Soup Member Contest SCREWED

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 3/25/2015 3:19:00 AM
Dane Ann, this poem is a masterpiece. How could anyone ignore the elegance and beauty that shines from every line of this classic beauty? I loved everything about it. I am so happy it finally has recognition it deserves! Hugs, Connie 7 I have missed your poetry.
Login to Reply
Date: 3/24/2015 2:57:00 PM
Absolutely delightful imagery Dane Ann congrats:-) Hugs jan xx
Login to Reply
Date: 3/24/2015 1:04:00 AM
I don't know how it did in the original contest, but I am glad you entered it in mine. Congrats.
Login to Reply
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 3/24/2015 5:58:00 AM
Thank you, Rob. It got an N/A in the original contest. I also am glad that I entered it in your contest. Thank you for the 4th place win. I thought it was a beautiful poem inspired by one of the paintings in the original contest. Because of your contest, I re-red, changed a couple of words to improve the syllable count and entered your contest. You have made my day. A BIG THANKS!
Date: 12/2/2014 7:39:00 AM
Wonderfully descriptive Dane. You have captured the evening and mood quite well. I'm sure Isaiah will love this. Good luck.
Login to Reply
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 12/3/2014 4:41:00 AM
Thank you, Brenda. I am so glad you enjoyed the evening in the palace with me. I love to imagine! Big smiles.

Book: Shattered Sighs