The Painting

 
The art gallery was deserted as I wandered the rooms,
Contemplating quietly alone and peacefulness was mine;
Stopping at a painting of a lone woman, I gazed at her face,
Eyes that looked sad, much like mine and as I looked, I wished.

She looked so heavenly but she wore her deep sadness,
I could feel her pain, O, if I could but step within the frame;
And in a blink, I was transported and was within the painting,
I looked out at myself, a girl with sad and fathomless seeking eyes.

My gown within the frame was quite lovely, soft and rich,
A forest green velvet creation with white lace peaking out;
I sat on a gilded chair and on my lap lay a white mink fur coat,
My hand stroked the fur in my sadness, it seems I was going outside.

Behind me was a window view of a frozen lake and stark trees,
Storm clouds gathering in the sky, I shivered, the year was 1817;
I felt elegant, my hair falling in waves, cascading down to my waist,
But the deep sadness within my soul was overwhelming, tears flowing.

And then I  was a girl, so vintage in her style with sleek long hair,
Standing in the gallery, in front of the painting of the lonely woman;
Slowly, I walked slowly away but the sadness within my soul remained,
And I knew that forever this painting will always haunt my nightly dreams,

                                                       And my days . . .

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October 28, 2012


Poetry/Narrative/The Painting
Copyright Protected, ID 10-431-541-28
All Rights Reserved, 2012, Constance La France

Inspired by the painting Henriette Le Moine (1817)
Painted by Theophile Hamel
National Gallery of Canada

Submitted to the Standard contest, Story, 
sponsor,  Rob Carmack, Judged 11/2012 

Fifth Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Campbell Avatar
August 14, 2015 at 8:34 AM
I love your poem. Impressive Engaging Barbara
A. Sharma Avatar
August 13, 2015 at 1:42 AM
Congrats on ur awesome winning write broken! love ur emotive writes!
A  Avatar
August 13, 2015 at 1:40 AM
Broken, wonderful win... SKAT
Ongawo Avatar
December 29, 2012 at 8:05 AM
hope you come down from the portrait before painting is taken for deep storage; a lot of sad contrasting imagery nice work, Constance -Lucas-
Chircop Avatar
November 7, 2012 at 8:05 AM
This poem touched my heart dear Constance..I'm so happy to return to the soup and find you here writing dear...Charma
Horne Avatar
November 4, 2012 at 3:09 PM
such a clever write, Constance - just love it. Glad you're still enjoying the art gallery. Will check out more of your poems tomorrow. Have a great day with the kitties x
Sivey Avatar
October 28, 2012 at 12:32 PM
I feel your sorrow that you so eloquently described here my friend! I really enjoyed reading this incredibly awesome poem this afternoon! What a powerful piece this one is, quite the sombre poem, Great Work!!
St.Cross Avatar
October 28, 2012 at 12:09 PM
‡ Quite A Somber Tale, Sweet Beautiful Constance. If I Would Have Been Standing There Aside Your Beauty I Would Have Grabbed Your Precious Hand Afore The Frame Took Hold; Dashing Outside Joyfully Through The White Powered Snow. Sweet Kisses To You, And Thank You For Your Kind Visit. Wonderful Poetic Painting. My Love, Rachel *
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