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The Painter and the Poet

The story of my life started gruesome and cold No time for existence, as the story unfolds But I met a special someone eyes as blue as day And although we couldn't always be together I knew I'd find a way. So as the nights grew longer the day had come, Off to Vancouver away from the sun. Their lives so different; And parted to be She painted great pictures for everyone to see. And as for I days darkened loosing hope with the fact, Finding the joy that I felt I lacked. I wrote down my feelings to let it all out "I hate my life," i felt to shout. So this story does end happy as you all hoped it to be This little ol' story of the Painter and Me. Though I wont tell you the rest to ruin the surprise, Its ends with us watching the sunrise.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 11/9/2010 5:23:00 PM
Killer ending! I love when you "leap" and it works! Good for you! Congrad's on your winning rhyme ;) Light & Love
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Date: 11/8/2010 11:04:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning write in Frank's Love Story Contest Kristen. Love,Carol
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Date: 11/8/2010 5:46:00 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win, Kristen
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Date: 11/8/2010 5:43:00 AM
Congrats Kristen on your HM in the Love Story contest with this lovely entry.. enjoy your special honor with luv..
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Date: 10/29/2010 7:36:00 AM
nice thoughts.i enjoyed it.fabiyas
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