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Painted horses are not just made of wood, they are painted with memories.                                       

Quote by _Bette Largent

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Like all other kids I loved carousel horses, to me they moved with magical forces; So, delighted when father took me to the fair, I rode a painted horse without a care. Father watched me from the side waving his arm high, that night . . . I dreamt of riding in the sky; We went again and I picked a different one, saying- this one can really leap and run. I tried all the painted horses going round- round, with the carousel music . . . a sweet sound; in time, I was given my own real horse to ride, but painted horses rode by my side. _____________________________ March 18, 2020 Poetry/Rhyme/The Painted Horses Copyright Protected, ID 20-1237-249-03 All Rights Reserved, 2020, Constance LA France Written for the contest, Carousel Picture Prompt sponsor, Eve Roper First Place

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Date: 4/7/2020 7:21:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Dear Heart , with great imagery, rhyme and I love that you put yourself in it. Thank you for entering my contest! Hugs Eve
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Date: 4/7/2020 11:24:00 PM
Eve, thank you for another wonderful contest and for my placement, it was a joy to write _Constance
Date: 4/7/2020 6:17:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Great write. I love you added, "Painted horses are not just made of wood, they are painted with memories. Quote by _Bette Largent." That is so true. Enjoy your win and day.........
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Date: 4/7/2020 11:24:00 PM
Paula, thanks for the congratulations and the compliment on my poem and I love that quote too _Constance
Date: 4/7/2020 2:06:00 PM
I wonder if it was riding on carousel horses that gave you the love of these animals:-) many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx n
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Date: 4/7/2020 11:26:00 PM
Jan, thanks for the congratulations, well my grandpa had a farm and he had some horses and I used to help him so that is where I learned to love them, so finally when I was old enough he gave me a horse of my own _Constance
Date: 4/7/2020 12:10:00 PM
Nostalgic piece taking us all back to our childhood and the childhood of our children who begged to ride every time a carousel was seen and heard. Congrats on your win. I love your quote too on painted horses.
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Date: 4/7/2020 11:27:00 PM
Reason, thanks for the great comment and the congrats, I love the quote too _Constance
Date: 4/7/2020 9:21:00 AM
Such a beautifil poem, Constance-- CONGRATS! Janice
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Date: 4/7/2020 10:42:00 AM
Janice, thank you for visiting with the beautiful and the congrats _Constance
Date: 4/7/2020 3:44:00 AM
A charming step back in time with this gorgeous write. Thank you for the ride, Constance, and congrats on your #1 win! Hugs ~ John
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Date: 4/7/2020 10:43:00 AM
John, thank you for the visit and the gorgeous and the congrats, it is true I did get my own horse in time _Constance
Date: 3/18/2020 11:12:00 PM
Dear Heart, Wonder in riding and reaching for the brass ring. I loved taking the kids to ride the carousel in days gone by. Good memories traced in Rhyme. -Richard
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Date: 4/7/2020 10:44:00 AM
Richard, thanks for visiting and for the great comment,I think even today kids love the carousel _Constance
Date: 3/18/2020 1:24:00 PM
Simply a lovely write. Great memories.
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Date: 4/7/2020 10:44:00 AM
Ken, thanks for the lovely, appreciate _Constance
Date: 3/18/2020 10:27:00 AM
I like it.
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Date: 3/18/2020 10:31:00 AM
Martin, thanks for visiting and the compliment _Constance

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