The Pain She Infuses

Infuriated Of her nagging loveless heart She hurts with a stare Russell Sivey

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Robert Pettit

Date: 1/12/2012 8:33:00 PM

Russell, she must have done a real number on you! This is one of the most descriptive senryu poems I have ever encountered.

Kash Poet

Date: 1/12/2012 12:42:00 PM

Very good Senryu by you Russell.Enjoyed the read.

Greg Stanley

Date: 1/11/2012 11:27:00 PM

Russell, very nice. Oh how troubled she is, enjoyed it, Greg

Jslambert Mister Roboto

Date: 1/11/2012 11:12:00 PM

Woman sounds like a psycho VAMPIRE. But then again, you could be writing of Cinderella or a Corpse for that matter.:) Russ, keep tapping into the Poetic Well Spring...It is there for us to bathe in! There was one of your poems that I would be honored to read at 55West this week in Orlando. If you'd allow something like that, plz let me know so I can tell you which poem! I will read your name and location BEFORE and AFTER I read the piece, with your permission. (a crowd of around 250-400 ppl

Jancarl Campi

Date: 1/11/2012 9:04:00 PM

This reminds me of someone I knew long, long ago. the words here sent chills through me. Take care and Good luck in 2012, Jancarl