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The Pain Remain

My flesh is burning down, set on fire that what it is The blood that's in my veins Evaporates Ground crumbling down just like me The truth is that I want to be blind why would I chose to see? Is this some kind of memories or its some ghosts hunting me ? Do I even have the choice to chose or will i remain silent to the eternity? I hate this life thats for sure Whenever you bleed down it asks for more No me left to take and no more betting heart to break Soul for humans so I don't have one any more unless someone know if I can find it in a store I use to think that whenever I get hurt my wounds will heal again If that so then why the scars have gone but the pain remain

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Hyde Murrell

Date: 11/15/2016 6:00:00 PM

This is really just amazing. As I was reading it I felt as though I really connected to it.

Dalia Shahein
Date: 11/15/2016 6:47:00 PM

Thank you very much my dear for your lovely words they mean so much and I'm so glad you felt that , hugs / / :)

Justin Bordner

Date: 2/23/2016 8:58:00 PM

The exhaustion, and revulsion that seems to mix concrete in your precious blood takes me to heavy moments of pain Dalia. Your honesty, aggression and bravery have always been an inspiration to me.The pain remains because your heart hasn't died my Violet Poetess...J.A.B.

Dalia Shahein
Date: 2/24/2016 4:46:00 PM

Thank you very much my dear for ur most sweet comment ever it means so much for me and I'm really truly honored by your lovely words and your pleasant visit , hugs / / :)

White Sage

Date: 1/29/2016 1:33:00 AM

your sorrow surely can be lessened, just believe...

Dalia Shahein
Date: 1/30/2016 6:32:00 AM

Thank you very much my friend , much appreciated..// :)

Vladislav Raven

Date: 1/10/2016 3:38:00 PM

hI dALIA, SUCH A SAD WRITE LITTLE ONE. The scars never truly disshall cause you pain. Through time the pain may lessen but it never truly appear, although we think they do. The scars as they remain, they shall cause there pain. Through time pains do lessen but i don't think they ever go away. I can say through each pain i have learned something. I know through my whole life i shall be learning. A seven and a fave Dalia. You really open up on this one. Hugs....Vladislav

Dalia Shahein
Date: 1/10/2016 6:33:00 PM

Thank you very much my dear for ur supportive , lovely words they are much appreciated, I'm honored by these beautiful words and by this pleasing visit, hugs / / :)