The Pain Remain

My flesh is burning down, set on fire that what it is    
                           The blood that's in my veins Evaporates 
                            Ground crumbling down just like me 
  
             The truth is that I want to be blind why would I chose to see?
           Is this some kind of memories or its some ghosts hunting me ?
      Do I even have the choice to chose or will i remain silent to the eternity? 

                                       I hate this life thats for sure   
                         Whenever you bleed down it asks for  more
               No me left to take  and no more betting heart to break

                      Soul for humans so I don't have one any more  
                      unless  someone know if I can find it in a store 
        I use to think that whenever I get hurt my wounds will heal again
           If that so then why the scars have gone but the pain remain
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Murrell Avatar
November 15, 2016 at 6:00 PM
This is really just amazing. As I was reading it I felt as though I really connected to it.
Shahein Avatar
November 15, 2016 at 6:47 PM
Thank you very much my dear for your lovely words they mean so much and I'm so glad you felt that , hugs / / :)
Bordner Avatar
February 23, 2016 at 8:58 PM
The exhaustion, and revulsion that seems to mix concrete in your precious blood takes me to heavy moments of pain Dalia. Your honesty, aggression and bravery have always been an inspiration to me.The pain remains because your heart hasn't died my Violet Poetess...J.A.B.
Shahein Avatar
February 24, 2016 at 4:46 PM
Thank you very much my dear for ur most sweet comment ever it means so much for me and I'm really truly honored by your lovely words and your pleasant visit , hugs / / :)
Sage Avatar
January 29, 2016 at 1:33 AM
your sorrow surely can be lessened, just believe...
Shahein Avatar
January 30, 2016 at 6:32 AM
Thank you very much my friend , much appreciated..// :)
Raven Avatar
January 10, 2016 at 3:38 PM
hI dALIA, SUCH A SAD WRITE LITTLE ONE. The scars never truly disshall cause you pain. Through time the pain may lessen but it never truly appear, although we think they do. The scars as they remain, they shall cause there pain. Through time pains do lessen but i don't think they ever go away. I can say through each pain i have learned something. I know through my whole life i shall be learning. A seven and a fave Dalia. You really open up on this one. Hugs....Vladislav
Shahein Avatar
January 10, 2016 at 6:33 PM
Thank you very much my dear for ur supportive , lovely words they are much appreciated, I'm honored by these beautiful words and by this pleasing visit, hugs / / :)
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