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The Pain of Night

She much preferred the days. In rays of sun She’d wrap herself as if they were a shawl. But quiet horror crept when day was done, for Night closed in - a grim and awful pall. That memory more easily suppressed when sunlight drenched her soul came flooding in as shadows loomed, and then a blackness pressed into her consciousness the guilt of sin. Though it was not a sin deliberate, the Pain of Night arrived as if to scoff at her for thinking that she might forget the time she drove her car, then nodded off. . . How horrible that sight she can’t erase - her victim’s young and bloodied stricken face.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 6/18/2015 4:46:00 PM
That would be a lifetime of regret. A sad poem . love phyl
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Date: 3/26/2015 8:35:00 AM
Andrea, just so you know I have the same problem with you (that is finding a poem I have not commented on already, lol) anyways not sure if I commented on this one but I love it and congratulations on your win with it, a perfect 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, and that comes . . .
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Date: 3/14/2015 10:24:00 AM
Wow, ...I am almost taken back to an old twilight zone episode! Congratulations on this, another Andrea sonnet that can quicken the heart!
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Date: 3/13/2015 12:27:00 AM
I just got a new lesson on the agreement between the theme of the contest and the write, and that is from reading this one. This is not just a 3-day pain of guilt. This is lifetime! Congratulations, Andrea! :) Kim
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Date: 3/10/2015 4:37:00 PM
A gripping story Andrea. An excellent write and win. Hugs
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Date: 3/10/2015 3:30:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Andrea - so pleased to see this place highly for you:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/10/2015 2:34:00 PM
A sad, but poignant take on the pain of night, Andrea. Well written, and congrats on your win!
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Date: 3/10/2015 11:28:00 AM
Back with my congrats, Andrea...I knew your hauntingly painful write would do well!! Hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 3/10/2015 9:53:00 AM
Congrats on your win! Thank you for supporting my contest. So many people have to live with this same quilt.
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Date: 3/10/2015 9:45:00 AM
The pain of the night haunting us for our sin... Wow dear!!! .. Congrats to your big win :))
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Date: 3/10/2015 4:19:00 AM
Brilliant poem Andrea...the healing of such trauma is not easy and how true that the night is a time when these shadows best us. Thanks for penning :)
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Date: 3/9/2015 10:13:00 PM
Wow, Andrea, I missed reading this until now. This is such a powerful poem with an unsuspected dreadful ending. Congrats on your wonderful win. Sandra
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Date: 3/9/2015 7:35:00 PM
Man, I was waiting for the reason for her sin and then I was punched with that ending. Powerful and awesome write. It's something I hope never to have happen to me, to hit someone with a vehicle and have them die.
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Date: 3/9/2015 11:01:00 AM
Very interesting ending. The shock factor alone made me reread it a few times. Great couplet to end with!
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Date: 3/9/2015 8:40:00 AM
just exhaled...good work...jmg
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Date: 3/9/2015 8:27:00 AM
Andrea, your poem is deep and profound in misery, I can only imagine living with that sort of pain, well done and best of luck and thank you so much for my win in your Romantic Contest, I am so honoured . . .
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Date: 3/8/2015 11:13:00 PM
Wow...this is real pain of night. Incredible, the realistic imagery. My brother knew someone who witnessed a man get hit by a bus. Though, he wasn't the one who hit him, he was terribly affected.
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Date: 3/8/2015 9:02:00 PM
Loved this one, the emotion grabs you!!!
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Date: 3/8/2015 7:38:00 PM
how terrible to have to live with that knowledge Andrea superb pen hugs 7
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Date: 3/8/2015 6:56:00 PM
In the shadows of our soul some carry a private toll. An instant of a moment that continues to get told. Within a crippled censored conscience. They try to make up for what doesn't make sense. Such an awful thing to live with Andrea. Peace. :)
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Date: 3/8/2015 6:40:00 PM
This is a great entry for t he contest Andrea. I cant think of a thing for it. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 3/8/2015 4:35:00 PM
I was hooked from start to finish - such intense imagery - a total nightmare - how could you get over that scenario - fabulous take on the theme - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx 7 xx
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