The Pain of Night

She much preferred the days. In rays of sun
She’d wrap herself as if they were a shawl.
But quiet horror crept when day was done,
for Night closed in - a grim and awful pall.

That memory more easily suppressed
when sunlight drenched her soul came flooding in
as shadows loomed, and then a blackness pressed
into her consciousness the guilt of sin.

Though it was not a sin deliberate,
the Pain of Night arrived as if to scoff
at her for thinking that she might forget
the time she drove her car, then nodded off. . . 

How horrible that sight she can’t erase -
her victim’s young and bloodied stricken face.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Babcock Avatar
June 18, 2015 at 4:46 PM
That would be a lifetime of regret. A sad poem . love phyl
La France Avatar
March 26, 2015 at 8:35 AM
Andrea, just so you know I have the same problem with you (that is finding a poem I have not commented on already, lol) anyways not sure if I commented on this one but I love it and congratulations on your win with it, a perfect 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, and that comes . . .
Richards Avatar
March 14, 2015 at 10:24 AM
Wow, ...I am almost taken back to an old twilight zone episode! Congratulations on this, another Andrea sonnet that can quicken the heart!
Nunez Avatar
March 13, 2015 at 12:27 AM
I just got a new lesson on the agreement between the theme of the contest and the write, and that is from reading this one. This is not just a 3-day pain of guilt. This is lifetime! Congratulations, Andrea! :) Kim
Macfarlane Avatar
March 10, 2015 at 4:37 PM
A gripping story Andrea. An excellent write and win. Hugs
Allison Avatar
March 10, 2015 at 3:30 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Andrea - so pleased to see this place highly for you:-) Hugs Jan xx
Leiser Avatar
March 10, 2015 at 2:34 PM
A sad, but poignant take on the pain of night, Andrea. Well written, and congrats on your win!
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
March 10, 2015 at 11:28 AM
Back with my congrats, Andrea...I knew your hauntingly painful write would do well!! Hugs, Rhonda
Reams Avatar
March 10, 2015 at 9:53 AM
Congrats on your win! Thank you for supporting my contest. So many people have to live with this same quilt.
Torres Avatar
March 10, 2015 at 9:45 AM
The pain of the night haunting us for our sin... Wow dear!!! .. Congrats to your big win :))
Furlong Avatar
March 10, 2015 at 4:19 AM
Brilliant poem Andrea...the healing of such trauma is not easy and how true that the night is a time when these shadows best us. Thanks for penning :)
Haight Avatar
March 9, 2015 at 10:13 PM
Wow, Andrea, I missed reading this until now. This is such a powerful poem with an unsuspected dreadful ending. Congrats on your wonderful win. Sandra
Walker Avatar
March 9, 2015 at 7:35 PM
Man, I was waiting for the reason for her sin and then I was punched with that ending. Powerful and awesome write. It's something I hope never to have happen to me, to hit someone with a vehicle and have them die.
Carter Avatar
March 9, 2015 at 11:01 AM
Very interesting ending. The shock factor alone made me reread it a few times. Great couplet to end with!
Goff Avatar
March 9, 2015 at 8:40 AM
just exhaled...good work...jmg
La France Avatar
March 9, 2015 at 8:27 AM
Andrea, your poem is deep and profound in misery, I can only imagine living with that sort of pain, well done and best of luck and thank you so much for my win in your Romantic Contest, I am so honoured . . .
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
March 8, 2015 at 11:13 PM
Wow...this is real pain of night. Incredible, the realistic imagery. My brother knew someone who witnessed a man get hit by a bus. Though, he wasn't the one who hit him, he was terribly affected.
Vaso Avatar
March 8, 2015 at 9:02 PM
Loved this one, the emotion grabs you!!!
Hamilton Avatar
March 8, 2015 at 7:38 PM
how terrible to have to live with that knowledge Andrea superb pen hugs 7
Johnson Avatar
March 8, 2015 at 6:56 PM
In the shadows of our soul some carry a private toll. An instant of a moment that continues to get told. Within a crippled censored conscience. They try to make up for what doesn't make sense. Such an awful thing to live with Andrea. Peace. :)
Marcum Wong Avatar
March 8, 2015 at 6:40 PM
This is a great entry for t he contest Andrea. I cant think of a thing for it. Good luck in the contest.
Allison Avatar
March 8, 2015 at 4:35 PM
I was hooked from start to finish - such intense imagery - a total nightmare - how could you get over that scenario - fabulous take on the theme - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx 7 xx
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