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The Pain Death Bestows

There was less affection when we last parted, I had a feeling you were broken hearted. It had been a few years since your pain started, I thought in time you’d heal from my devotion as your death grimly drifted in slow motion. Your gentle sore heart was completely guarded. So I tarry with fear to your resting place, under an emerald pine wearing God's grace. If only your warm arms were here to embrace me when I miss you with woe at night alone- My troubled forsaken heart has turned to stone. I whisper hellos and goodbyes just in case. The depth of my sorrow compares not to yours. You wore burn holes on your sleeve to shield the sores- My daughter in tears for years yet still adores her auntie who left without saying goodbye, not knowing how to tell her how you did die. You made a choice to sail to heaven’s soft shores. I tried, you lied- Angel’s wept when you died. I’ve lived eight years of strife- since you, my sister…took your life. I prayed for so long that your anguish would cease as the loss of your smile brings me to my knees- From death I'm deaf...but hear your laugh in the breeze. *sorry this poem is so long, my muse kept spreading* Move Me Poetry Contest Richard Lamoureux June 14, 2019

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Date: 7/28/2019 8:23:00 AM
An awesome poem, Lu Loo. The tone is perfect and heartfelt. Congrats on your most deserving win.
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Date: 6/26/2019 3:29:00 PM
A beautiful heartfelt winning poem Luloo. Congratulations! : ) xxoo
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Date: 6/26/2019 9:54:00 AM
Congrats, I had a first place winner who didn’t enter a new poem. Now your poem is in its deserved top ten placement.
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