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The Pack

We prowl we howl in fear you scowl. We run at night full moons alight. The taste’s so sweet copper-iron you see... Fresh flesh’s the best a cut above the rest. So tender succulent repast sublime! Ashamed by day ravaged by night.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019


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Gershon Wolf
Date: 5/1/2019 10:16:00 PM
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Cool one, M.L! Rhythm reminiscent of Langston Hughes' classic, 'We real cool...' Excellent! :) gw
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 5/2/2019 4:35:00 PM
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Wow, what a compliment! I am honored. Thanks so much.
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 5/1/2019 8:37:00 AM
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Into the wild side...a succinct surprise M.L. brilliantly penned! : ) xxoo
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 5/1/2019 2:52:00 PM
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I thank you.
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David Mchattie
Date: 4/30/2019 5:02:00 PM
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Sounds like me raiding the refrigerator at 3 in the morning. Have a great day my friend.
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 5/1/2019 2:52:00 PM
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LOL, if you get hungry...you get hungry. Thanks.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 4/30/2019 4:19:00 PM
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Are you making fun of my howling wolf side? This one fairly dances, and leaps, like us!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 5/9/2019 1:24:00 AM
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And of course I am a wereperson.
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 5/1/2019 2:52:00 PM
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Only if you are a wereperson.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 4/30/2019 3:42:00 PM
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It's free verse mixed with rhyme . yes, it really shows that wild pack "feeling"
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 5/1/2019 2:53:00 PM
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Thanks.
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Eve Roper
Date: 4/30/2019 3:22:00 PM
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Oh, I truly like this verse. I can just see the pack at night roaming together as one to accomplish their needs.
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 5/1/2019 2:53:00 PM
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Many thanks; glad you enjoyed it.

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