The Pack

We prowl we howl in fear you scowl. We run at night full moons alight. The taste’s so sweet copper-iron you see... Fresh flesh’s the best a cut above the rest. So tender succulent repast sublime! Ashamed by day ravaged by night.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Wolf Avatar
May 1, 2019 at 10:16 PM
Cool one, M.L! Rhythm reminiscent of Langston Hughes' classic, 'We real cool...' Excellent! :) gw
Kiser Avatar
May 2, 2019 at 4:35 PM
Wow, what a compliment! I am honored. Thanks so much.
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 1, 2019 at 8:37 AM
Into the wild side...a succinct surprise M.L. brilliantly penned! : ) xxoo
Kiser Avatar
May 1, 2019 at 2:52 PM
I thank you.
Mchattie Avatar
April 30, 2019 at 5:02 PM
Sounds like me raiding the refrigerator at 3 in the morning. Have a great day my friend.
Kiser Avatar
May 1, 2019 at 2:52 PM
LOL, if you get hungry...you get hungry. Thanks.
Krutsinger Avatar
April 30, 2019 at 4:19 PM
Are you making fun of my howling wolf side? This one fairly dances, and leaps, like us!
Krutsinger Avatar
May 9, 2019 at 1:24 AM
And of course I am a wereperson.
Kiser Avatar
May 1, 2019 at 2:52 PM
Only if you are a wereperson.
Dietrich Avatar
April 30, 2019 at 3:42 PM
It's free verse mixed with rhyme . yes, it really shows that wild pack "feeling"
Kiser Avatar
May 1, 2019 at 2:53 PM
Thanks.
Roper Avatar
April 30, 2019 at 3:22 PM
Oh, I truly like this verse. I can just see the pack at night roaming together as one to accomplish their needs.
Kiser Avatar
May 1, 2019 at 2:53 PM
Many thanks; glad you enjoyed it.
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