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The Outstretched Palm of Gabriel

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Jewish mysticism states souls come from the Tree of Life in the Garden of Eden and fall into the Guf a treasury of the body.The angel Gabriel’s hand brings them forth and the angel Lailah watches over them until they are born. Sparrows can see the descent of each soul that is why they sing.



 



regrets rise and fall chafing at the frayed nerve endings of a finite life, unfolding like origami cranes around the neck of kamikaze pilots chewing at the bones of our discontent, leaving holes in the fabric being. regrets, like and of, unborn children never growing to fruition, never falling bud to blossom they decay, never reaching the Guf pointless misconceptions of a wary heart first born in joy left to rot in sorrow. regrets rise and fall yet we chose to retain them in the after-image of retinal flares, ocular migraines inwardly staring toward Gabriel’s outstretched palm embryos unblessed. never regret ever regret never

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Date: 8/8/2017 5:02:00 PM
Distinct!....
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Date: 2/19/2013 4:03:00 PM
Debbie, congrats... :-) pd
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Date: 2/19/2013 7:19:00 AM
Beautiful Debbie. Congrats on your well deserved win. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 2/18/2013 6:52:00 PM
Very descriptive language! An excellent piece, Debbie! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Date: 2/18/2013 4:46:00 PM
very interesting write...congrats on a fine win
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Date: 2/18/2013 4:04:00 PM
Truly beautiful! Congratulations on another very fine win, Debbie...And thanks for sharing the info about your inspiration fo this gem!
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Date: 2/16/2013 9:50:00 PM
OUCH! (she squeezes her Sis's hand) and HELL, YEAH, (she then gives a high five and on the side, publish worthy this one) Sent soup mail. Suggestion. xox Love Dee
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Date: 2/16/2013 7:07:00 AM
This I can't answer
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Date: 2/16/2013 10:30:00 AM
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 2/16/2013 7:24:00 AM
not sure what you feel needs answering? I have not asked a question?

Book: Shattered Sighs