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The Outside Dunny

In the fifties it was the suburban icon that survived the start of the renovation phase and still graced the backyards of most houses in the neighborhood, the ubiquitous Australian outside dunny. Ours was a corrugated iron oven that cooked you in the summer and would freeze even the most proud member down to a modest size in winter. Daddy long leg spiders would watch from the walls and ceiling and bounce about in their webs when the chain on the overhead cistern was pulled and water gushed out. One hot summer's day my Dad was sitting on the loo with the door open and saw a snake crawl across the lawn. Up with his trousers he pursued the snake until it slid into the shade house, grabbing it by the tail as it slipped through the wire netting fence. For an hour he called out hoping someone would hear and help him deal with the snake. Back then there were no snake catchers you could call, you either killed it or let it go and worried whether it would come back. Finally our neighbor, Jim Ireland, came running in armed with an axe and as Dad slowly pulled it back out, dealt the reptile a fatal blow. When I came home from school that day, there was this four foot brown hanging on the clothesline almost cut in half. It seemed too small to pack such danger, its jaws sealed shut in death over those lethal fangs. I couldn't bring myself to touch it in fear that it might spring back and bite me in a final revenge. That year, my Dad kept the dunny door open all summer. He never saw another snake. I should have been a better son. Notes. Though rather obvious, the term “dunny” refers to an outside toilet, a good old Australian colloquialism. It's rare to find snakes in suburban backyards these days unless near open areas and waterways. As a matter of interest, the snake referred to in the poem was an “Eastern Brown” whose venom is rated as the second most toxic in the world, the most toxic being the Inland Taipan another Australian species.

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Date: 9/25/2024 10:56:00 AM
Hello Paul, You took me back to my days on the farm because we did not have an indoor bathroom. We had an outhouse and there were all kinds of critters that called it home. I had to laugh as I read your well inked poem because it reminded me of all kinds of memories back then including snakes. - Blessings, My Friend, Daniel
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Paul Willason
Date: 10/1/2024 4:15:00 AM
Ah the opportunties afforded by the outside dunny to expose us to nature...pity some of them are a bit intimidating like sbakes and spiders. Many thanks Daniel for commenting and sharing yr thoughts. Valued my friend. Take care...
Date: 9/25/2024 6:27:00 AM
Exposure of a snake but not your dad's backside! lol Glad he pulled up his trousers when leaving the dunny. Where I grew up, we'd often see snakes of all sorts. Mostly harmless king snakes in the garden (I lived on a farm) but in our fishing areas there were poisonous water moccasins. I recall watching my cork so intently one day, that I heard my Dad whisper, "Don't move. There's a moccasin about to crawl over your foot." I think snakes are beautiful, but from a distance. I enjoy your writes.
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Paul Willason
Date: 10/1/2024 4:10:00 AM
Just love your packed full comments Lin...always a delight to read. Apologies for delayed reply...been out of it lately. I know snakes have a place in Gods catalogue of creatures but I confess I don't like em....especially the bighty parts, sincere thanks my dear friend for sharing your thoughts...engaging as usual. Paul

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