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The Other Side of the Hill

What happens when you get to the other side of the hill The one you fight to climb your whole life through What happens when you’ve already made it to the top and now you’re looking down, a bottom view A backwards climb back up will just not happen So, better make that bottom safe and sweet Maybe Jack and Jill could have the answers Maybe it just means that life’s complete

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Date: 10/18/2017 6:33:00 AM
Be careful of those that put you on the top, they are the ones who will bring you back down.. which also mean it could be you... Life is never complete my friend, there is always a new horizon waiting..
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Mike Gentile
Date: 10/18/2017 7:40:00 AM
So True, Silent One, must remember to stay positive, xxoo
Date: 10/17/2017 1:37:00 PM
I think that jack and Jill has the answer. have a nice day my friend. xxxx
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Mike Gentile
Date: 10/17/2017 2:12:00 PM
Thanks Darlene, you too xxoo
Date: 10/17/2017 9:40:00 AM
Nice :) xomo!
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Mike Gentile
Date: 10/17/2017 10:00:00 AM
thanks xxoo

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