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The Other Me

THE OTHER ME I want to scream, “wakeup, Get going and get dressed” The “other me”, screams back, “No way, I’m too depressed”. The mornings flying by And now, it’s after four I’ve never gotten dressed Much less, got out the door. All plans. Interrupted My schedule shot to h*** I’lm going back to bed Stay there till I fell well. Isn’t this ridiculous Acting like a silly fool Or like some sleepy child Too tired to go to school. “Wake up! Wake up! Wakeup! Three times means emphasis That old lady screams back, “Not on you life, sweet Miss” Do you have an, “Other” Telling you what to do? Is she your, “Make believe” Or is she, really you? Someone’s going to be blamed For all you did not do. Will you be blaming her Or her accusing you? Barbara Barry Nishanian Copyright April 1, 2003

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Date: 6/16/2018 8:38:00 AM
You deal with a serious topic with wonderful good natured humour.
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Barbara Barry-Nishanian
Date: 8/22/2019 9:21:00 PM
Checking old emails, discovered your nice comment, thank you so much for the encouragement, hate it comes over a year later. Thank you, really mean it!
Date: 2/19/2018 12:20:00 AM
Love the humour :)
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Barbara Barry-Nishanian
Date: 6/16/2018 3:51:00 PM
I found laughing at myself is the best medicine, if make others laugh, that's how I help improve their health too. Hope you'll visit again. Thanks
Date: 1/28/2018 3:35:00 AM
This poem is full of wisdom amongst the humour. Just read your response to July Morning below...my god woman, I hope you are travelling well, viagra must jump start it all! Hope your health is improving. x
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Barbara Barry-Nishanian
Date: 6/16/2018 3:48:00 PM
Hello dear friend.Your poem's jump start me and my heart the way you express things. Sorry so late replying. I going to Orlando soon to P.A.H. convention. Feel the men and women further along this unknown path will be inspiring as well.
Date: 1/9/2018 5:08:00 PM
Damn, you were fighting yourself.. an excellent poem Barbara..
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Barbara Barry-Nishanian
Date: 2/19/2018 3:59:00 AM
Thanks for calling it excellent. This poem gave me the courage to get on P.S. with you guys and gals. Thanks for support. bbn
Date: 1/5/2018 4:19:00 PM
Hi Barbara. Thanks for your comments. I like this poem, 'The Other Me'. What a great contest start. I find it rather creative.
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Barbara Barry-Nishanian
Date: 7/16/2019 11:54:00 PM
I am not sure how I didn't realize you and others had commented. So encouraging, thank you so much! I am glad to be back. won't wait over a year to thank you if you visit again.
Date: 1/5/2018 1:22:00 PM
Cute.
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Barbara Barry-Nishanian
Date: 7/16/2019 11:55:00 PM
to you Ronald, and others late thanking, been away and didn't see I had any comments, thank for reading.
Date: 1/5/2018 12:21:00 PM
The "poem of the day" is right at the top , click on it. I think u got the honour be that's what the other comment down your poem seems to suggest. Maybe ask her too. Take care.
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Date: 1/5/2018 6:52:00 AM
This got to poem of the day honor right? Congrats on this well deserved spotlight where u playfully in enviable flow chide yourself. Superb rhyming too. Glad to have met your fantastic poems, read more than one from yah. Kudos.
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Barbara Barry-Nishanian
Date: 1/5/2018 8:38:00 AM
Hello...I don't know where to go to verify if this received recognition or not..Can you tell me where to go to find out? I am so new, don't know way around. Any way I appreciate that you like it. First time I'm sharing my verses with public. Thank you so much. Now I will go and find you,

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