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The Opening

--The opening of a new life-- Airborne smiles under a pessimistic cloud Peaceful living memories, wiping every frown Vibrant beams throughout the night The outflow shadows cloud nine; Scoot away from the pain, Enjoy all eyes towards the gateway An endless fate awaits Maybe not today Perhaps not tomorrow Be Free * Live Happily And just Believe-- --The Beginning of everything-- By; PD A Sweet Merry Christmas From: PD

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Joe Maverick

Date: 9/22/2018 3:49:00 PM

A write that challenges some ideas and the way we carry on, on our journey through life P D, I hope you are doing well.?

Joseph May

Date: 5/16/2015 8:13:00 PM

I love the first line of this beautiful write Linda...Nicely penned...love

Richard Poor

Date: 12/20/2014 11:12:00 AM

ok...I like this!

Robin Davis

Date: 7/10/2014 9:33:00 PM

PD A poem with a lot of wisdom and truth. A lesson that we all should try to live by. Thank you for the sweet comment on my Friends Don't Give Up poem.

Tim Smith

Date: 6/21/2014 12:53:00 AM

You will be the first to know when it happens. 2/3 is complete the rest is still a mystery...just like you :)

Paul Callus

Date: 6/19/2014 5:14:00 PM

HI Linda, your advice to move on in life is sound reasoning; unfortunately many find it hard to cope with their misfortunes or to escape from their past. // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/2/2014 1:02:00 AM

PD. thanks for all your recent comments and congrats. I can hardly keep up with your contests, girl!!!

Akash Puri Goswami

Date: 2/11/2014 5:40:00 AM

"an endless fate awaits"....... nice lines... -- akash

Cherl Dunn

Date: 1/22/2014 8:06:00 PM

Just a wonderious truthful write people say that life is coming to an end but i believe it is just beginning, maybe it's the native american in me. cheri

Colin Cook

Date: 1/20/2014 5:29:00 PM

A nice poem thanks hope you are free and happy And thanks for your kind comment on my poem Colin

Stephen Kilmer

Date: 1/15/2014 5:04:00 PM

I can dig it. Just believe sister and everything will be alright. Good to see you in 2014. ~Kilmer

Pace Ink-U-Script

Date: 1/8/2014 10:34:00 AM

NICE!!!! :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/8/2014 12:03:00 AM

Enjoying this one again, PD. it was such a happy one.

Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 1/6/2014 12:50:00 PM

So inspirational, and so beautifully worded. I feel better already!!! Thanks Lisa. Best wishes, Keith

Trevor Barnett

Date: 1/3/2014 1:34:00 PM

A wonderful poem about hope, well done. If more people had this mind set there would more happiness in the world.

Len Gasun

Date: 12/30/2013 1:18:00 AM

Good afternoon my dearest sis! I'm coming back to read and enjoy once again this extremely lovely poem of yours. Missing to reread your masterpieces! TYSM for your precious gems & everything! By the way, belated TYSM for the Christmas Carol song & all Christmas wishes! I still want to sing w/ u. Wishing u all the best of Health & Happiness esp. this coming New Year . Advance Happy Three Kings as well. Goodnyt there now. I'll take my short rest hoping my flu remnants will vanish. Lovem4everLeo

Bl Devnath

Date: 12/29/2013 9:43:00 AM

Extreme beauty hidden in opening, a great philosophical poem, my friend. Loved always, bl

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 12/28/2013 1:13:00 PM

Thanks for your wishes always nice to read your poetry and your comments. Wishing you and your family the very best for 2014. I hope this new year will be full of inspiration. love phyl

Harry Horsman

Date: 12/28/2013 10:44:00 AM

to read your poetry is to believe,,in poetry in you...

Sandra Adams

Date: 12/27/2013 7:35:00 PM

such an inspirational poem...enjoyed reading this little treasure of yours tonight....hope you had a great Christmas :) hugs

Cherl Dunn

Date: 12/27/2013 6:30:00 PM

Yes i sang along with you on my Christmas carol loved it by the way, nice write above as always my friend thanks for all the laughter and care you've showed me throughout the year. and for becoming a great friend and confidont. sorry if my sp is not so hot. cheri

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 12/27/2013 3:31:00 PM

Beautiful message penned.Happy New year pd.

Jon Arno

Date: 12/26/2013 10:59:00 PM

Marvelous! Marvelous in every way. Enjoyed reading this piece tonight Linda...Best regards...Jon

Kelly Deschler

Date: 12/26/2013 9:21:00 PM

There is no better time like the present to turn a new leaf, especially with a new year approaching! I hope that you and your family had a great Christmas, and I wish you all the best for the New Year!...Thank you very much for the kind words and well wishes!

Richard D Seal

Date: 12/26/2013 8:32:00 PM

I love your attitude my Sweet Dark Friend, i've been at the gates of a new beginning a few times myself, everytime for the better as I'm sure you will find. Expressive and beautiful write as always. Take care, Richard