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The Opening

--The opening of a new life--

Airborne smiles under a pessimistic cloud
Peaceful living memories, wiping every frown 
Vibrant beams throughout the night 
The outflow shadows cloud nine;

Scoot away from the pain,
Enjoy all eyes towards the gateway
An endless fate awaits 

Maybe not today
Perhaps not tomorrow
Be Free * Live Happily
And just Believe--
--The Beginning of everything--

By; PD


A Sweet Merry Christmas   From: PD

Copyright © Poet Destroyer A | Year Posted 2013

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Joe Maverick Date: 9/22/2018 3:49:00 PM A write that challenges some ideas and the way we carry on, on our journey through life P D, I hope you are doing well.? Login to Reply

Joseph May Date: 5/16/2015 8:13:00 PM I love the first line of this beautiful write Linda...Nicely penned...love Login to Reply

Richard Poor Date: 12/20/2014 11:12:00 AM ok...I like this! Login to Reply

Robin Davis Date: 7/10/2014 9:33:00 PM PD A poem with a lot of wisdom and truth. A lesson that we all should try to live by. Thank you for the sweet comment on my Friends Don't Give Up poem. Login to Reply

Tim Smith Date: 6/21/2014 12:53:00 AM You will be the first to know when it happens. 2/3 is complete the rest is still a mystery...just like you :) Login to Reply

Paul Callus Date: 6/19/2014 5:14:00 PM HI Linda, your advice to move on in life is sound reasoning; unfortunately many find it hard to cope with their misfortunes or to escape from their past. // paul Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 4/2/2014 1:02:00 AM PD. thanks for all your recent comments and congrats. I can hardly keep up with your contests, girl!!! Login to Reply

Akash Puri Goswami Date: 2/11/2014 5:40:00 AM "an endless fate awaits"....... nice lines... -- akash Login to Reply

Cherl Dunn Date: 1/22/2014 8:06:00 PM Just a wonderious truthful write people say that life is coming to an end but i believe it is just beginning, maybe it's the native american in me. cheri Login to Reply

Colin Cook Date: 1/20/2014 5:29:00 PM A nice poem thanks hope you are free and happy And thanks for your kind comment on my poem Colin Login to Reply

Stephen Kilmer Date: 1/15/2014 5:04:00 PM I can dig it. Just believe sister and everything will be alright. Good to see you in 2014. ~Kilmer Login to Reply

Pace Ink-U-Script Date: 1/8/2014 10:34:00 AM NICE!!!! :) Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 1/8/2014 12:03:00 AM Enjoying this one again, PD. it was such a happy one. Login to Reply

Keith Bickerstaffe Date: 1/6/2014 12:50:00 PM So inspirational, and so beautifully worded. I feel better already!!! Thanks Lisa. Best wishes, Keith Login to Reply

Trevor Barnett Date: 1/3/2014 1:34:00 PM A wonderful poem about hope, well done. If more people had this mind set there would more happiness in the world. Login to Reply

Len Gasun Date: 12/30/2013 1:18:00 AM Good afternoon my dearest sis! I'm coming back to read and enjoy once again this extremely lovely poem of yours. Missing to reread your masterpieces! TYSM for your precious gems & everything! By the way, belated TYSM for the Christmas Carol song & all Christmas wishes! I still want to sing w/ u. Wishing u all the best of Health & Happiness esp. this coming New Year . Advance Happy Three Kings as well. Goodnyt there now. I'll take my short rest hoping my flu remnants will vanish. Lovem4everLeo Login to Reply

Bl Devnath Date: 12/29/2013 9:43:00 AM Extreme beauty hidden in opening, a great philosophical poem, my friend. Loved always, bl Login to Reply

Phyllis Babcock Date: 12/28/2013 1:13:00 PM Thanks for your wishes always nice to read your poetry and your comments. Wishing you and your family the very best for 2014. I hope this new year will be full of inspiration. love phyl Login to Reply

Harry Horsman Date: 12/28/2013 10:44:00 AM to read your poetry is to believe,,in poetry in you... Login to Reply

Sandra Adams Date: 12/27/2013 7:35:00 PM such an inspirational poem...enjoyed reading this little treasure of yours tonight....hope you had a great Christmas :) hugs Login to Reply

Cherl Dunn Date: 12/27/2013 6:30:00 PM Yes i sang along with you on my Christmas carol loved it by the way, nice write above as always my friend thanks for all the laughter and care you've showed me throughout the year. and for becoming a great friend and confidont. sorry if my sp is not so hot. cheri Login to Reply

Charmaine Chircop Date: 12/27/2013 3:31:00 PM Beautiful message penned.Happy New year pd. Login to Reply

Jon Arno Date: 12/26/2013 10:59:00 PM Marvelous! Marvelous in every way. Enjoyed reading this piece tonight Linda...Best regards...Jon Login to Reply

Kelly Deschler Date: 12/26/2013 9:21:00 PM There is no better time like the present to turn a new leaf, especially with a new year approaching! I hope that you and your family had a great Christmas, and I wish you all the best for the New Year!...Thank you very much for the kind words and well wishes! Login to Reply

Richard D Seal Date: 12/26/2013 8:32:00 PM I love your attitude my Sweet Dark Friend, i've been at the gates of a new beginning a few times myself, everytime for the better as I'm sure you will find. Expressive and beautiful write as always. Take care, Richard Login to Reply

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