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The Open Door

In my dream there was a door Out in a beautiful open meadow Threw that door there was more Light so white that invited come follow In this meadow there was no clutter My soul was calling me to enjoy Come in to this quiet place, settle Gain strength being connected to source

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 10/4/2009 6:29:00 PM
Hi Sara in our dreams we are gifted with all things that are difficult to imagine but the pure beauty that lies within us all comes through in our dreams to reawaken the serenity in our minds so that we may walk down the path of tranquility and when we are awakened by the early morning sun we feel complete and whole and refreshed because of the peacefulness that we were able to embrace in our dreams, Thank you for sharing, this is beautiful, Dean
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Date: 10/1/2009 7:59:00 PM
connecting with God's creation well done..............kate
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Date: 10/1/2009 6:14:00 AM
Great poem. Keep writing. -Matthan
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Date: 9/30/2009 5:55:00 PM
inspirational poem, sounds likethe after life
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Date: 9/30/2009 9:52:00 AM
Very good Sara. I also want to thank you on your comments on "Spiritually Dead and A Sacrifice" Sorry it took a few days to respond. As you know I'm incarcerated and my friend sends me the comments on my poems and I tell him what to write back. I have read some of your work, I was curious about your work for "your first comments". "My True Love" was good Sara. Your writing is very unique that's for sure. Take care...Jimmy
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