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The Only Beauty

The only beauty This early winter morning with a chill upon the air A mourning dove is singing melodies for us to share Frost collects the valley glistening on fields of green Bringing us a vision of a wonderland pristine And as the sun is rising on the distant dawning skies The only beauty that I see is found within your eyes Good morning Soupers

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Date: 7/11/2019 4:34:00 PM
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Date: 3/14/2019 11:40:00 AM
Whoa, such artistry, Chris. Love, Panagiota 3/14/2019
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Chris Green
Date: 3/14/2019 11:58:00 AM
Thank you so much
Date: 1/5/2019 2:44:00 PM
I love this one, Chris. It's just so lovely and filled with a pure love. Short and sweet.
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Date: 1/5/2019 10:13:00 AM
Wow! Lovely, concised and beautiful. Straight to my favs..
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Date: 1/4/2019 1:11:00 PM
- A wonderful beauty, Chris ... a beautiful picture you share :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/3/2019 12:33:00 AM
Great poem
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Date: 12/27/2018 10:27:00 AM
Beautiful symbiosis well done Chris
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Chris Green
Date: 12/27/2018 10:44:00 AM
Thank you Kelli, I am happy you liked this one.
Date: 12/27/2018 1:00:00 AM
Beautiful rhyme, Chris, with such smooth tempo and delightful imagery ... there is romance in almost everything, I believe, it just takes altering your perspective at times ... you see the world through imaginative eyes, and for me, that is the truth to good poetry and a happy life. I thoroughly enjoyed this write and am adding to my favorites ... keep up the marvelous work, and wonderful holidays to you and yours. :-)
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Chris Green
Date: 12/27/2018 7:48:00 AM
Thank you Greg for leaving such a wonderful comment for me on my poem. I am thrilled you enjoyed this one so much. I appreciate your kindness my friend.
Date: 12/23/2018 5:21:00 PM
So romantic -- leave those ladies swooning, my friend. Happy Holidays! ~ Gershon
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Chris Green
Date: 12/27/2018 7:48:00 AM
Thanks my friend. Sorry for the late reply, I guess I didn't see this.
Date: 12/22/2018 2:06:00 PM
Sigh....So romantic...
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Chris Green
Date: 12/27/2018 7:47:00 AM
Thank you so very much Charmaine. I love when you visit my poetry.
Date: 12/21/2018 8:08:00 AM
Nothing could distract you from the beauty of your loved ones eyes, not even nature's bounty. What a testament to love your poem is, Chris! I'd love to see the image of the frost-covered valley you described so eloquently. Just a few more days till Christmas, so stay merry! Hugs, Carolyn
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Chris Green
Date: 12/21/2018 9:19:00 AM
Thank you Carolyn. I am so happy you enjoyed this one. Your visits always make me smile.
Date: 12/21/2018 8:04:00 AM
Hi Chris, You sure have a way with words. You have created such a lovely sight. It looks amazing. I loved the line" The only beauty that I see, Is found within your eyes" Those are heart-melting line. I hope who it was intended for appreciated it. Good morning my friend:-) Alexis
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Chris Green
Date: 12/21/2018 9:18:00 AM
Thank you so very much Alexis. I appreciate all of the kindness you show me.
Date: 12/21/2018 8:02:00 AM
Beautiful Chris! I can't imagine frost with all our snow and now this ice today lol. You write such special poems. Good morning :)
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Chris Green
Date: 12/21/2018 9:16:00 AM
Thank you so very much Heidi. It sounds lovely as well in your part of the world.

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