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The One Who Survives

post-crash four funerals not my fault, mourners say paralyzed by survivor's guilt what now?

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Date: 9/12/2016 3:11:00 PM
Very powerful and such a contrast to your other poems. Thinking of you...
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 9/25/2016 8:40:00 PM
Thank you so much, Kathleen! Janice
Date: 2/13/2016 4:16:00 PM
Janice, congratulations on your placement in survivor contest!!!
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 2/13/2016 8:32:00 PM
Thank you, Eve! Janice
Date: 2/11/2016 11:20:00 PM
It is so hard...Even being a survivor. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 2/12/2016 8:57:00 AM
Thank you, Joyce! Janice
Date: 2/11/2016 10:55:00 PM
Thank you for the reply
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Date: 2/11/2016 10:27:00 PM
Janice, Congratulations on your awesome win. XOX ~LINDA~
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 2/11/2016 10:52:00 PM
Thanks so much, Linda. Janice
Date: 2/11/2016 9:54:00 PM
Very touchy.. congrats on ur great win with this awesome write Janice.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 2/11/2016 10:25:00 PM
Thank you. Janice
Date: 2/11/2016 6:04:00 PM
Thank you for participating in my contest “The One Who Survives”..It was an honor to read your entry..Survivor's guilt is really hard to overcome but one can overcome and live to do something to improve the world..Sara
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 2/11/2016 7:38:00 PM
Thank YOU, Sara! Janice
Date: 2/11/2016 2:03:00 PM
A very good entry with a great ending. Janice! Your win is much deserved...congratulations! ~ Regards // paul
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 2/11/2016 5:08:00 PM
Thank you so much, Paul. Janice
Date: 2/11/2016 12:10:00 PM
Powerful impact with this Cinquain, Janice. Many s on your win. Elaine
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 2/11/2016 12:18:00 PM
Thank you, Elaine! Janice
Date: 2/11/2016 12:02:00 PM
janice, this is well told..big congrats on your win...huggs
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 2/11/2016 12:19:00 PM
Thank you, Nette! Janice
Date: 2/11/2016 11:44:00 AM
Goodness... Congratulations on your win with such a sad story you have expressed so well.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 2/11/2016 12:19:00 PM
Thank you, Susan! Janice
Date: 2/11/2016 10:03:00 AM
A very sad but winning cinquain, Janice. Well done.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 2/11/2016 12:20:00 PM
Thank you, Lin! Janice
Date: 2/10/2016 12:11:00 PM
Janice, excellent entry. I don't think you could have ended it any more effectively.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 2/10/2016 4:16:00 PM
Thanks so much, Steve. Janice
Date: 2/9/2016 11:45:00 AM
Excellent Cinquain, Janice.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 2/9/2016 12:03:00 PM
Thanks so much, Elaine! Janice
Date: 2/9/2016 10:31:00 AM
A touching verse of a real master of Cinquain.Deep impressed of meditation, too. Before This accident, I used my cellular: An unknown calling me again... Watch on !
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 2/9/2016 11:12:00 AM
Ovidiu, thank you so much! Janice
Date: 2/9/2016 10:06:00 AM
Oh sad..I like how you set this up. sorry about the circumstance but I think this is very good. BG
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 2/9/2016 11:13:00 AM
Thanks so much, Barbara. Janice