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the one thing she wants is the one thing she can't have when will her tears dry JADE

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Date: 5/12/2015 6:46:00 AM
You speak VOLUMES in three short lines my friend! I identify...
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Date: 5/12/2015 1:09:00 AM
Great questionku, Eileen! Thought provoking. Love, Kim
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Date: 5/10/2015 10:17:00 PM
they say time heals all wounds . . . I am not sure about that but tears do change -- some into bitter ugly feelings . . . others evaporate leaving a memory . . . I have read "Those who sow with tears will reap with songs of joy." my hope, my prayer, is that she will sing with joy one day. A lovely poem LO . . . it gave me pause tonight! Hugs always. 7
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Date: 5/10/2015 6:37:00 PM
Her tears will never fully dry, because her heart is too tender and to harden that would change the beauty of her soul. A wonderful poem dear Lady. love Shane xxx I agree with Mystic Rose, eyes as soft as yours were not meant for tears.
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Date: 5/10/2015 2:18:00 PM
It's human nature to want what we can't have...beautiful write. A7
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Date: 5/10/2015 12:21:00 PM
great questionku....it happens many times in our lives...I have cried that cry....Tim
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/10/2015 12:55:00 PM
It does, doesn't it? ;) Some dreams are meant to be kept on the shelf...We dust them off now and again and have a good cry...they back they go. Thanks for the visit, Tim. Hugs
Date: 5/10/2015 12:10:00 PM
oh I love it Eileen! :-) Hugs jan xx
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/10/2015 1:15:00 PM
:) Thanks, sweetie. Hugs to you!!!