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The One For Eternity and Beyond

I don't know whether I'm in love with her, Or am I just trying to free myself from being alone, I don't want to see her cry, I can't even imagine a world without her smile Is she the One, Or is this just another obstacle, I don't mind , Because nothing's keeping me from her I see bliss in her eyes, And I see her in my future, I think this it, The truest form of love May the Master of All Things Himself guide me, I beg of You to make me see, Whether what I'm feeling is true or not, Or whether I'm just afraid to be alone Solitude has never bothered me , But now I see her and think of it, I will lose a long time friend, Yes , I will throw away anything for her For heaven's sake I'd lose everything for this girl, She's the bliss I feel every morning, I see her as a reason for my existence, The purest flower in all the fields I love her, And I don't fear love anymore, I'm willing to be hers, If she's willing to be mine For an eternity I wish to keep her, For her I will give her all the stars in the sky, I love her and I will care for her, For all of eternity and beyond.

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Date: 10/19/2014 9:24:00 PM
Masterful honesty of feelings uncensored, Angelus. The emotions in this piece are not only poetic, but purely expressive in their imagery. Great structure as well. Enjoyable overall. Check out some of my poems, might find some you like. Peace.
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Andrei Manzon
Date: 10/22/2014 7:48:00 AM
Such high praise friend! Thank you!
Date: 6/16/2014 7:58:00 PM
Thank you for the reply...Linda
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Date: 6/13/2014 8:21:00 AM
Bravo! You're really in love with her and it shows in this wonderful poem! Go on both with your poems and love!
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Andrei Manzon
Date: 6/16/2014 7:45:00 AM
I "was" in love when I wrote this. This was for my ex when we were still back together. But thanks for the support. Appreciate it.
Date: 6/11/2014 4:15:00 AM
:) welcome here kabayan :) Im here in poetrysoup since 2011 and I enjoyed it here I hope you will to as I am.. :) lots of pinoys and pinays here. :) you write a sweet and endearing write here.. :)
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Andrei Manzon
Date: 6/16/2014 7:44:00 AM
Thank you. And yes thanks for the warm welcome. That's Filipino tradition . Really appreciate it.
Date: 6/10/2014 1:58:00 PM
Such beautiful poetry! Congratulations on it's being featured . Nicole
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Andrei Manzon
Date: 6/16/2014 7:43:00 AM
Thanks. I didn't expect it to be featured. But thanks again.
Date: 6/9/2014 7:46:00 AM
Angelus,, Congratulations on having your poem Featured on the Poetry Soups Home Page. Enjoy the coming week. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Andrei Manzon
Date: 6/16/2014 7:43:00 AM
It's an honor thank you again Linda.
Date: 6/9/2014 6:23:00 AM
A piece of good poetry. Keep it up and congrats on your poem selected to be featured, Angelus
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Andrei Manzon
Date: 6/16/2014 7:42:00 AM
I really didn't expect this to be featured. Thanks though!
Date: 6/8/2014 2:04:00 PM
Hi Angelus, thank you for the comment on my comment. (hope you are enjoying this site)..Linda
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Date: 6/8/2014 12:06:00 PM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Angelus :) - I choose your first lovely written poem - Well done !! - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Andrei Manzon
Date: 6/8/2014 12:11:00 PM
Thank you. I changed my name to stop the confusions. I will be kind. My purpose here is to write and appreciate poetry.
Date: 6/5/2014 8:56:00 PM
Fides,, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Andrei Manzon
Date: 6/5/2014 11:47:00 PM
You're so sweet and kind. Thank you very much. Well I'll read your compositions when I get the time. Right now I'm quite busy balancing my other life outside poetry.
Date: 6/5/2014 3:08:00 PM
Welcome to PoetrySoup, Fides. Here's hoping you enjoy getting to know people in this community, Keep writing and enjoy reading the poetry of others. If you comment on other's poems, many will return the favor. Best wishes.
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Andrei Manzon
Date: 6/5/2014 11:46:00 PM
Thank you. Best wishes to you and your family too. Hope you find my poems useful.
Date: 6/5/2014 7:38:00 AM
Sweetly, beautiful. .....Fides, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Andrei Manzon
Date: 6/5/2014 11:45:00 PM
Thank you! The community here is so kind. Well I'll try.
Date: 6/5/2014 4:53:00 AM
This I wanted to dedicate to my lady. Wanted to share it on Facebook. Brother,you have a very precious gift. Cherish her.
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Andrei Manzon
Date: 6/5/2014 5:02:00 AM
Thank you very much for sharing it. It's an honor.

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