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The Older We Get

The older we get, the longer the time It takes for our bodies to heal, So we shouldn’t regret, since we’re out of our prime, That we aren’t as strong as we feel. Be it virus or flu or a cut or a bruise, What took days to improve now takes weeks. The old cures we once knew our new selves just refuse To allow us to climb to our peaks. Our two choices then are to ignore the advice And resume our activities fast, Or, though it seems bizarre, to avoid rolling dice And slow down ‘til all symptoms have passed. What will be, either way, if we rush or we halt, We’ll be subject to what fate has planned. At the end of the day, it is nobody’s fault, Due to forces we can’t understand.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 5/20/2023 1:06:00 PM
Every time my PCP prescribes a new prescription, I think, oh yeah...well, what do you know anyway..."We'll be subject to what fate has planned..." I'm perfectly okay with that. A great piece, Ilene.
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Date: 5/20/2023 12:35:00 AM
When I was younger I did not realize this "What took days to improve now takes weeks." but now I realize it every day! So well done
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Date: 5/16/2023 6:12:00 PM
I'm good, thank God, and I still have my mom! Hope it's not that bad for you, Ilene :)
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Date: 5/16/2023 12:37:00 PM
My mom in her 90's now would sure agree. She loved her 70s but the 80's started going bad. Here I am still in 60's and the crap has begun!!
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Date: 5/15/2023 6:17:00 PM
Yup! The spirit is willing, but the old flesh is weak, as they say...
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Date: 5/15/2023 1:13:00 PM
oh so true Ilene I've recently noticed I take longer to get over ailments. Hope hubby is on the road to getting better:-) hugs Jan xx
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Ilene Bauer
Date: 5/15/2023 1:16:00 PM
Hey Jan! Yes, he is, but it’s a slow process. Thanks for your concern…

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