The Older We Get

The older we get, the longer the time
It takes for our bodies to heal,
So we shouldn’t regret, since we’re out of our prime,
That we aren’t as strong as we feel.

Be it virus or flu or a cut or a bruise,
What took days to improve now takes weeks.
The old cures we once knew our new selves just refuse
To allow us to climb to our peaks.

Our two choices then are to ignore the advice
And resume our activities fast,
Or, though it seems bizarre, to avoid rolling dice
And slow down ‘til all symptoms have passed.

What will be, either way, if we rush or we halt,  
We’ll be subject to what fate has planned.
At the end of the day, it is nobody’s fault,
Due to forces we can’t understand.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Slaughter Avatar
May 20, 2023 at 1:06 PM
Every time my PCP prescribes a new prescription, I think, oh yeah...well, what do you know anyway..."We'll be subject to what fate has planned..." I'm perfectly okay with that. A great piece, Ilene.
Krutsinger Avatar
May 20, 2023 at 12:35 AM
When I was younger I did not realize this "What took days to improve now takes weeks." but now I realize it every day! So well done
Anaya Avatar
May 16, 2023 at 6:12 PM
I'm good, thank God, and I still have my mom! Hope it's not that bad for you, Ilene :)
Dietrich Avatar
May 16, 2023 at 12:37 PM
My mom in her 90's now would sure agree. She loved her 70s but the 80's started going bad. Here I am still in 60's and the crap has begun!!
Wolf Avatar
May 15, 2023 at 6:17 PM
Yup! The spirit is willing, but the old flesh is weak, as they say...
Allison Avatar
May 15, 2023 at 1:13 PM
oh so true Ilene I've recently noticed I take longer to get over ailments. Hope hubby is on the road to getting better:-) hugs Jan xx
Bauer Avatar
May 15, 2023 at 1:16 PM
Hey Jan! Yes, he is, but it’s a slow process. Thanks for your concern…
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