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The Old Wood

He said cover me with poems
when I'm in the old wood
paint your eyes of sapphire 
and run free you should.

I am the small dreams in your memory
the waterfall in your tears
the beat in your heart
the life of your art.

He said I am the papercut
that bleeds a quick pain
I am the door not shut
I am a lingering sugar cane.

I am the ash of beauty
the reality of nothing
the instruments in sing
the streep of a sting. 

Yes, cover him with poems 
when he's in the old wood 
paint his eyes of sapphire
and run free he should.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Prabhu Avatar
December 24, 2011 at 10:46 AM
well written
Brown Avatar
December 19, 2011 at 8:28 AM
Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week Erin. I hope to see you as a premium member in the new year. Love, Carol
Ramos Avatar
November 4, 2011 at 7:00 AM
Erin, haunting and moving. I can't help but feel influence from Robert Frost.
Nash Avatar
November 10, 2011 at 6:25 AM
thank you, I love the fact that poetry is subjective
Nutter Avatar
November 4, 2011 at 3:32 AM
Well written enjoyable read.
Nash Avatar
November 10, 2011 at 6:27 AM
thank you anthony..its my favourite poem that i've written
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