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The Old Western Burial Ground

A macabre garden
rank with smell of green moss.
Silent mouths murmur nothing
as visitors snap and click 
awed in reverence of the raven poet.

The Old Western Burial Ground 
Greene and Fayette Streets in Baltimore
a rotten Poe rests here
his beloved decayed Virginia.
Bone to bones on bones timber in mute darkness.

Nissans and GMC trucks 
vibrate their eternal slumber
lying beneath city stories of noise
like fossils from the carriage age.
Does any life still whimper in the din?

Can we say it is a lovely graveyard?
Do we admire sentinels to the mournful torture of fate
pain, dying, life, calling them
historic to cherish forever?

Forever is each night
as nearby 
homeless lie sleeping 
on sidewalks.

2/28/18
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018


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Date: 2/7/2020 10:17:00 PM
Janis, Congratulations on your placement. Such a relevant poem in such vivid pictures.
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Date: 2/18/2019 2:45:00 PM
wow, this is so cool!! A topic I would probably never have had come into my mind. I am really glad to read your winning poem. Congrats, Janis.
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Date: 2/14/2019 2:42:00 PM
Janis, this is an amazing piece. I am so glad it was honored in the marathon contest. Congratulations :)
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Date: 2/14/2019 9:57:00 AM
Congratulations on your great win. Fascinating pictures to go with it.
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Date: 2/13/2019 8:01:00 PM
Back with more congrats on your win, Janis.
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Date: 2/13/2019 6:31:00 PM
Janis, this is brilliant, and the photos are so interesting! The last stanza is very sobering. Congratulations on your win on Mile 17 of my 2019 Poetry Marathon Contest! Thank you so much for supporting my contests. By continuing to place in the contests you are accumulating points toward the final. ~Mark
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Date: 5/20/2018 9:33:00 PM
A most interesting style and tribute, Sian. Well done. Congrats on your win.
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Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 5/21/2018 11:04:00 AM
Thanks Line. It's had a tough time of it.
Date: 2/28/2018 10:53:00 PM
Powerful poem, Sian! This is gem of a poem. This masterful blending of words sends a powerful message ---Forever is tonight as Nearby homeless lie sleeping on sidewalks. Powerful observation is elevating me. Fabulous poem ... this should place high in my humble opinion. Love and joy always.
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Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 5/21/2018 11:05:00 AM
Thanks Freddie
Date: 2/28/2018 8:32:00 PM
Wow!! Awesome write, luck in the contest..
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