The Old Train Depot

Many years ago, use to wait for a train,

at the old train depot,

so dark and dreary,

such hard curved seats,

they were.

The lights in there were

so dim, it was hard to

read my comic bookis.


Brother and sister,

mom and I would

go visit family

in the big city,

every so often,


it was such an

adventure each time,

I waited and looked for

the train to arrive,

until finally i would,

hear the train whistle

and we would get on

the train and leave our

small little town for the

weekend.

as the train pulled slowing

out of town,


I would watch as everything

got smaller, then i could not see

anything out the windows,

so i picked up my comic book

and began to read it, and

i went into another world,

as the train went faster

and faster.

that old train depot

is no longer there,

but my memoires

of it, is still there.

wrote 4-5-11
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Sweetheart Avatar
April 10, 2011 at 8:56 AM
thankxcx James for your wonderful comments on my blog and poetry luv.. wish u would enter my new contest .. u will enjoy am sure and u are a fine poet my friend.. give it a try ... see my new blog just posted for rules or contest page luv..happy Sunday ...
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April 10, 2011 at 7:16 AM
I get the feeling my friend and thanks for stopping by and the good words
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April 9, 2011 at 9:51 PM
Nostalgic memories, dear James...My loving grandparents used to live next to a railway station and my grandpa was a train conductor...decades ago. I still have candid memories of that place...Thank you for your comment. All the best, Iolanda
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April 9, 2011 at 7:58 PM
C ool childhoo memories, I remember reading comic book in another world too. The Whippoorwill is a nocturnal bird,a little smaller than a crow,brown in color with a very large mouth. They make a very lonsome sound at night. They have two distinct sounds they make, one sounds as though they are saying 'Whip-her-will, the other sound is 'Chick-by-the-white-Oak! I love to be out at night listening to their mating calls. Agape, Moses
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April 9, 2011 at 5:55 PM
I like it
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April 9, 2011 at 12:10 PM
Hello James, I like this poem. I also remember the old train stations it is a shame they are now only a memory. Take care, Jancarl
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April 9, 2011 at 11:50 AM
Hi James, to enter your poem in Frank's contest, go to the left hand side of Poetrysoup page and look under contests.- click on (contests by members) you will see them all listed there. click on enter contest and your poems will come up - then go to the poem you wish to enter and click on it. Then at the bootom there is a place to click on submit. Hope this helps,, Lainie
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April 9, 2011 at 7:45 AM
Nice poem. Did you ever see the litho called THE OLD DEPOT? It used to be under every agent clerks glass on their desk in North America. I think it is on the Internet, search THE OLD DEPOT. I think I still have a couple copies of it.
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April 8, 2011 at 10:34 PM
I love the part about going into another world. For me this is as much about escaping into the magical world of stories as it is about this train depot. I enjoyed the read!
Johnson Avatar
April 8, 2011 at 1:53 PM
Beautiful it made me think of my own childhood memories.
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April 8, 2011 at 7:09 AM
Brought back many memories of the trains. We had a station in our small town but it went up north so we had to drive 1 1/2 hours to get to the station that took us east or west. Great poem. soup mail
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April 8, 2011 at 6:38 AM
The best part of it you have the treasured memories.. enjoyed your memories James ;)
La France Avatar
April 7, 2011 at 8:35 PM
I have always loved the train, there is something magical about it, beautiful poem, and thanks for all your comments on my poetry~~
Horne Avatar
April 7, 2011 at 11:51 AM
Yes, I think we all have fond childhood memories of trains - lovely piece, James
Anish Avatar
April 7, 2011 at 7:54 AM
Intresting write! I used to love comic books and find train depots to be intersting places. Thank you for your kind words on my poem. Yours Matthew Anish
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April 7, 2011 at 6:33 AM
Nice memories of the past recollected in trnquility, James
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April 7, 2011 at 3:40 AM
Lovely poem, James! Reminds me of the "olden days" When I was 3 I wanted to go to the next town by train but was stopped by the train conductor, and still remember the scene with 67!!!
Kelly Avatar
April 6, 2011 at 7:43 PM
Lovely reminiscent poem :)
Austin Avatar
April 6, 2011 at 11:15 AM
My dad used to examine watches on the railroad out of North Platte, Nebraska, knew Buffalo Bill whose relatives lived in North Platte. Dad would have loved this poem. Me too. Love, daver
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April 6, 2011 at 10:55 AM
oh james, so many beautiful spots of heritage seem to be out of fahion in this modern era.. a sentimental write i am so fond of as it captures special moments gone by... darn lovely! :) huggs
Sweetheart Avatar
April 6, 2011 at 12:31 AM
An exciting way to travel James and provides a scenic route like no other.. wonderful emotion comes through your lines my friend.. enjoyed the trip with u ..luv..
George   Avatar
April 6, 2011 at 12:15 AM
Hi James, I remember a train station like that, in my birthplace of New Brunswick. It too is gone, but etched in my memory forever. Wonderful writing. Lainie
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April 5, 2011 at 9:08 PM
What wonderful memories you have of these train rides with your family. As times change, trains seem to be less popular and some of our local railway stations closed. Have you ever heard Arlo Guthrie's "City of New Orleans." It's about the disappearance of trains in American culture. Very moving poem, James. Best wishes, Carolyn
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April 5, 2011 at 4:40 PM
Time changes so many things but in so many places those train stations have been preserved..It is good that you have memories about those times..Enjoyed reading this eve..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work...Your presence was so uplifting..Sara
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April 5, 2011 at 2:44 PM
How unexpected to find a write as this dear poet ! Done so gentle, yet, it had just that right(write) amount of speed to it,,,awesome job ! Have a great week...much love, james
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