The Old Soldier

I watched him shake his hand
And say a gruff goodbye
To his beloved grandson.
Old soldiers do not cry.

He fiercely rubbed his eyes
To stop unmanly tears
As he recalled that other war
From those now long past years.

If old men could go to war
He would gladly take the place
Of this young lad without a clue
Of what he is to face.

He recalls himself, the innocent,
Proudly going off to war
To fight Hitler and his cronies,
Back in Nineteen Forty-Four.

He arrived there just in time
In the battles to indulge
In the most desperate fighting
The Big Battle of the Bulge. 

Though he lost so many buddies,
He somehow stayed alive
Until the bullet with his name
In Nineteen Forty-Five.

He felt his life-blood flowing.
All he could do was wait
For the pick-up crew to come for him.
He hoped they weren't too late.

They came too late to save his leg.
Doctors said that it must go.
For him the war was over,
At least they told him so.

But he kept right on fighting
Every night in his dark dreams.
He could see the bullets fllying
And could hear his comrade's screams.

He was glad to have his Mary
Who held him in her arms
And told him it was over
And soothed him with her charms.

He and Mary had two daughters.
They weren't blessed with a son.
Somehow he didn't mind because
He need not worry over one

Who like him would have to go
To fight another mindless war.
At last the nightmares ended.
He was at peace once more.

His pride was in this grandson
The son he never had,
This boy who said he wanted 
To be like his old granddad.

With one last wave he limped away
With his Mary by his side.
His nightmares had not ended.
That night the old man cried.

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Garrett Avatar
May 30, 2010 at 7:15 PM
Excellent, excellent - loved it. It fits well and if you don't mind I will keep it.
Mcgovern Avatar
January 29, 2010 at 5:37 PM
Powerful, every verse an exact description of the impact of war, not only on those going, but just as important those left behind. I followed your narrative as if I was reliving the scene myself as the young man going to war and now as the old man agonizing over the senseless loss again so far from home. You have produced a masterpiece that should be required reading by all, but in particular those who make the decision to again sacrifice our youth. Thanks for sharing. Mac
Estes Avatar
January 20, 2010 at 7:14 PM
this is some great work, god bless all the soliders
Coan Avatar
January 19, 2010 at 9:23 PM
Brilliant
Washam Avatar
January 19, 2010 at 8:09 PM
A very touching write Joyce. Beautifully written. I post on PIP and for awhile I was on the writingforum and I believe I have read your work on those sites. Take care and Have fun. Steve
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