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The Old Shed

“Hello….uh, umm…Have we met?...Yea, that's right…Sure… Karen?” Well I don't know you well but you seem like the kind That might join me for coffee at the five-and-dime? But they don’t have five-and-dimes anymore, Now they just call them 'Dollar Stores'. And you won't find a counter where coffee is served But if licorice and Spam is what you prefer A big Beggar’s Banquet is in store for you. We can chat and can laugh in my Subaru. Now a half-hour ago you were almost a stranger And a question like this could perhaps signal danger… Can we go to my place and chat there instead? My tool shed is warm (and there won't be a bed!) But there’s an old wooden desk that I got from my mom And a field jacket on the wall I brought back from Nam, Amid mouse traps, rakes, and seed for the lawn. I can brew up some tea; it won't take too long, It’s there that I write, maybe smoke a cigar. Its there that I keep my fears in a jar, A family reunion is framed on the wall. And my Stella guitar leaning in amongst all, If you just take a chair and let me sing you some songs That an old man kept hidden but never belonged In this dusty old shack. So…if you please, may I croon? Please, sit in the chair. Let me sing you a tune. ... and the song I sang? From Donovan - https://youtu.be/-cd2yG7BiVg

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Date: 1/16/2022 4:05:00 AM
This is great, Ken. Atmospheric, hugely descriptive and heart warming. Much enjoyed. Regards, Viv
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Ken Rone
Date: 1/17/2022 1:58:00 PM
Thanks for the contact Viv. I hoped you would read it. Best regards - Ken
Date: 4/11/2021 4:47:00 PM
Hilarious, sweet, and just tickled my innards. Thanks, Ken. :) gw
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Ken Rone
Date: 4/11/2021 5:57:00 PM
Mission accomished.
Date: 3/31/2021 1:32:00 PM
Rather fine write Ken, good imagination and insight too. Have a great day, Blessings, Gordon PS: thanks SMs, I'' get back to you in next few days.
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Date: 3/21/2021 7:40:00 PM
Really cute one Ken. Don't know how many dates you'll get if you invite them to your shed though. ;) A fun read in perfect rhyme and rhythm. God Bless, JB
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Ken Rone
Date: 3/21/2021 8:18:00 PM
Thanks for the kind comments. I tried for full disclosure and of course any similarities to persons dead or living is purely coincidental.
Date: 3/18/2021 4:09:00 PM
I think if it's a date with a down to earth woman, it will be just fine!! This was really fun to read.
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Date: 3/19/2021 11:25:00 AM
I burned the chair for firewood. Give me one that can split and stack wood while whistling "The Frozen Logger".
Date: 3/17/2021 7:23:00 PM
This work shows that you are a talented writer. I enjoyed the read.
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Ken Rone
Date: 3/18/2021 8:05:00 AM
Thanks for your kind and encouraging comment Temtations Man. :)
Date: 3/16/2021 2:16:00 PM
Sounds Pied Piperish to me...dreadful things happen in sheds.
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Ken Rone
Date: 3/16/2021 4:08:00 PM
I.e. an old man watching his life pass. Thanks for your read m'Lady.
Date: 3/15/2021 12:17:00 PM
You are a talented poet, Ken. I stayed glued from start to finish and enjoyed your story. The details painted a scene as if I was there watching it.
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Ken Rone
Date: 3/16/2021 11:37:00 AM
You are so kind Mr. Vijay. I enjoyed writing it, though Karen should bear no resemblance to persons living or dead.
Date: 3/13/2021 4:10:00 AM
Sure, room is dusty, Ken. Anyway, I didn't feel it because I tasted your warm cup of tea. Thank you for your song, too. I like such classical songs!!
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Ken Rone
Date: 3/13/2021 7:56:00 AM
You are so welcome and thanks. The song I sang? From Donovan : https://youtu.be/-cd2yG7BiVg
Date: 3/11/2021 6:02:00 AM
I really enjoyed this. I can picture you with the guitar, singing your songs. I play keyboard and have known some people who play guitar. This is a well written poem that puts the reader, right there at the scene and with feelings shared. Well done :)
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Ken Rone
Date: 3/19/2021 11:27:00 AM
in reviewing the comments I was not gentleman enough to reply. Perhaps my fat thumbs mis-submitted. Anyway Heidi, your encouragement is appreciated.
Date: 3/8/2021 1:35:00 PM
You can sing me a tune any time! Your words paint such a clear picture. I think that's what we're really after. Good job!
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Ken Rone
Date: 3/8/2021 3:18:00 PM
It is so good to hear that my simple rhyme touched you. thank you Ann.

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