The Old Shed

“Hello….uh, umm…Have we met?...Yea, that's right…Sure… Karen?”

Well I don't know you well but you seem like the kind
That might join me for coffee at the five-and-dime? 
But they don’t have five-and-dimes anymore,
Now they just call them 'Dollar Stores'.
 
And you won't find a counter where coffee is served
But if licorice and Spam is what you prefer
A big Beggar’s Banquet is in store for you. 
We can chat and can laugh in my Subaru.
 
Now a half-hour ago you were almost a stranger
And a question like this could perhaps signal danger…
Can we go to my place and chat there instead?
My tool shed is warm (and there won't be a bed!)
 
But there’s an old wooden desk that I got from my mom
And a field jacket on the wall I brought back from Nam,
Amid mouse traps, rakes, and seed for the lawn.
I can brew up some tea; it won't take too long,
 
It’s there that I write, maybe smoke a cigar.
Its there that I keep my fears in a jar,
A family reunion is framed on the wall.
And my Stella guitar leaning in amongst all,
 
If you just take a chair and let me sing you some songs
That an old man kept hidden but never belonged
In this dusty old shack. So…if  you please, may I croon?
Please, sit in the chair. Let me sing you a tune.

 ... and the song I sang? From Donovan - https://youtu.be/-cd2yG7BiVg
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Wigley Avatar
January 16, 2022 at 4:05 AM
This is great, Ken. Atmospheric, hugely descriptive and heart warming. Much enjoyed. Regards, Viv
Rone Avatar
January 17, 2022 at 1:58 PM
Thanks for the contact Viv. I hoped you would read it. Best regards - Ken
Wolf Avatar
April 11, 2021 at 4:47 PM
Hilarious, sweet, and just tickled my innards. Thanks, Ken. :) gw
Rone Avatar
April 11, 2021 at 5:57 PM
Mission accomished.
Mcconnell Avatar
March 31, 2021 at 1:32 PM
Rather fine write Ken, good imagination and insight too. Have a great day, Blessings, Gordon PS: thanks SMs, I'' get back to you in next few days.
Ball Avatar
March 21, 2021 at 7:40 PM
Really cute one Ken. Don't know how many dates you'll get if you invite them to your shed though. ;) A fun read in perfect rhyme and rhythm. God Bless, JB
Rone Avatar
March 21, 2021 at 8:18 PM
Thanks for the kind comments. I tried for full disclosure and of course any similarities to persons dead or living is purely coincidental.
Dietrich Avatar
March 18, 2021 at 4:09 PM
I think if it's a date with a down to earth woman, it will be just fine!! This was really fun to read.
Rone Avatar
March 19, 2021 at 11:25 AM
I burned the chair for firewood. Give me one that can split and stack wood while whistling "The Frozen Logger".
Pettit Avatar
March 17, 2021 at 7:23 PM
This work shows that you are a talented writer. I enjoyed the read.
Rone Avatar
March 18, 2021 at 8:05 AM
Thanks for your kind and encouraging comment Temtations Man. :)
Labyrinth Avatar
March 16, 2021 at 2:16 PM
Sounds Pied Piperish to me...dreadful things happen in sheds.
Rone Avatar
March 16, 2021 at 4:08 PM
I.e. an old man watching his life pass. Thanks for your read m'Lady.
Pandit Avatar
March 15, 2021 at 12:17 PM
You are a talented poet, Ken. I stayed glued from start to finish and enjoyed your story. The details painted a scene as if I was there watching it.
Rone Avatar
March 16, 2021 at 11:37 AM
You are so kind Mr. Vijay. I enjoyed writing it, though Karen should bear no resemblance to persons living or dead.
Ranaweera  Avatar
March 13, 2021 at 4:10 AM
Sure, room is dusty, Ken. Anyway, I didn't feel it because I tasted your warm cup of tea. Thank you for your song, too. I like such classical songs!!
Rone Avatar
March 13, 2021 at 7:56 AM
You are so welcome and thanks. The song I sang? From Donovan : https://youtu.be/-cd2yG7BiVg
Sands Avatar
March 11, 2021 at 6:02 AM
I really enjoyed this. I can picture you with the guitar, singing your songs. I play keyboard and have known some people who play guitar. This is a well written poem that puts the reader, right there at the scene and with feelings shared. Well done :)
Rone Avatar
March 19, 2021 at 11:27 AM
in reviewing the comments I was not gentleman enough to reply. Perhaps my fat thumbs mis-submitted. Anyway Heidi, your encouragement is appreciated.
Peck Avatar
March 8, 2021 at 1:35 PM
You can sing me a tune any time! Your words paint such a clear picture. I think that's what we're really after. Good job!
Rone Avatar
March 8, 2021 at 3:18 PM
It is so good to hear that my simple rhyme touched you. thank you Ann.
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