The Old Red Barn

The old red barn seems to grow up through the dust and brown
Along the vague dirt road that mars the sage.....

The rhythm played by rain for wait of seeds, still echoes here
Erect and proud, it stands somber as the purple shadows that surround the hills

A faint whistling song is heard within these derelict arms
A song of faith....a song of sweat...a song of contentment and tears

Someone fitted the beams, and squared window panes, ....and built a life 
Hope and pride filled to the rafters, as it overlooked rolling fields plowed, tilled and furrowed

Now weathered gray, it creaks and groans under dark prairie skies
It leans inches more with each Chinook wind that sweeps and sways the grain

Where now only wind whistles through the eves, and stiff grasses grow
And bats and mice find a place to live, and white stars shine down on loneliness

Abandoned and forsaken, while gaunt hills stand silently by
Day after day, under the prairie sky, this monument that is left alone to die

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 12/13/2010 10:32:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Carrie in Rick's contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/12/2010 6:52:00 AM
Many congratulations Carrie on your fine win with this wonderful entry. So many images one can picture through your words. Have a lovely Sunday >> James :)
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Date: 12/11/2010 7:21:00 PM
wonderful entry, congrats on your win in the contest
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Date: 12/11/2010 6:24:00 PM
What a colorful and descriptive story you've penned here. Nice indeed! RAY
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Date: 12/11/2010 10:17:00 AM
A song of faith....a song of sweat...a song of contentment and tears. Precious memories recall, Carrie. Congratulations, on your worthy poem honor. Agape, Moses
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Date: 12/11/2010 6:14:00 AM
Congrats Carrie on your HM in Rick's contest with this elegant write and win ... enjoy your special honor today with luv..
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Date: 12/11/2010 5:01:00 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of Red Barn, Carrie
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Date: 12/10/2010 11:32:00 PM
I was immersed in the beauty of your descriptions, Carrie. Congratulations on your placement in Rick's contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 10/10/2010 12:05:00 PM
wonderful write my friend [duncan]
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Date: 10/9/2010 8:46:00 AM
This new style of writing is very interesting and I am sure you would love to write something on this new form. By the way the U-Tube page would open only Hindi Kawaali. Please let me know if you feel a joy in listening? You can very much appreciate it once you know the meaning of the words used by the Male and Female singers in Meri Tasveer Laker Kya Karogi. Thank you once again for your precious comments on my Blog. Love and best wishes always……Ravindra…….Carrie Richards.
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Date: 10/9/2010 8:45:00 AM
Beautiful beyond words. You have sketched the memories of the old red barn with so much heart touching words that for a moment I thought I was moving on that abandoned and forsaken land. It was a different joy to read such pathetic old memories. Great write my friend and many thanks for your valuable and precious comments. This new style of writing is very interesting and I am sure you would love to write something on this new form. Continue in next … Ravindra ...Carrie Richards.
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Date: 10/8/2010 6:32:00 PM
Very wonderful write on the red barn, nicely worded, carrie
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Date: 10/8/2010 4:57:00 PM
Sad ...This memory of the past to only those that are of the older generation...It is so sad to see an era disappear...Great write..I see winner written all over it..Sara
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Date: 10/8/2010 4:20:00 PM
Smile ~ Poor old red barn dear lady but, "Your Beauty" showed so much tender compassion towards its waning once bright light glow of red stucco'd youthful joy ~ Smile, "Beautiful 'Lovely Carrie Richards,' Just Like 'Your Precious Tender Heart!" ~ "My Love & Warmth to 'You Always' &, All You Love," John! ~ Smile, "Have A 'Blessed & Beautiful' Evening 'Dear, Lovely Lady;'" Bye!:) ~
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Date: 10/8/2010 4:06:00 PM
Perfect image for the reader to close there eyes and picture this...great write my dear....Love Michael
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