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Entry for the Cessation Poetry Contest: Sponsored by: Unseeking Seeker  

 

 

 

 

He appeared gently from the shadow, hovered for a moment; then slowly slid his willowy fingers across hers; beyond her palm, damp with perspiration, to rest on her sylphlike wrist; where he measured her pulse. It had risen, slightly, but not yet enough; it would, when she opened her eyes. He waited patiently he had all the time in the world, she did not.

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Date: 10/1/2024 10:56:00 AM
wow, that is SO impactful. Hope you win.
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Date: 9/26/2024 12:06:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your write. "Good Luck" Have a wonderful/blessed day writing away.........................
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