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The Old Oaks

steadfast, the wrinkled strong arms of the old oaks, remain invincible in handshake - firm grip. the lightning, rain & gusts cannot separate the best of friends.

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Date: 10/20/2023 9:29:00 AM
Such metaphoric words of comfort and love. Congratulations on your win! Blessings of joy to you!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/20/2023 11:13:00 AM
Thank you, Sam! I also wrote this on a birthday card for my BFF! God bless you!
Date: 10/12/2023 10:18:00 PM
Congratulations on a win.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/13/2023 6:00:00 AM
Thank you, Karen!
Date: 10/12/2023 2:02:00 PM
Well said Kim, great imagery, I could picture it in my mind. congrats on a nice win!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/12/2023 2:18:00 PM
Thank you, John!
Date: 10/6/2023 8:16:00 AM
Yep, those oaks stand together through thick and thin, Kim. Nice imagery. Have a great weekend, my friend. Bill
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/12/2023 2:19:00 PM
Thank you, Bill!
Date: 10/5/2023 12:48:00 PM
I liked this. I can see the trees with their handshakes...
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/12/2023 2:23:00 PM
Thanks, Paige!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/12/2023 2:21:00 PM
Thanks, Paige!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/12/2023 2:19:00 PM
Thanks, Paige!
Date: 10/5/2023 6:17:00 AM
I love this. Great poem :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/5/2023 6:21:00 AM
Thanks, Heidi!
Date: 10/5/2023 1:28:00 AM
Loved your metaphoric use on the old oak trees. Hugs and blessings.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/5/2023 6:21:00 AM
Thank you, Victor! God bless you :)
Date: 10/4/2023 11:33:00 PM
Steadfast friendship matures and lasts like the old oak. Nice metaphor, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/5/2023 6:22:00 AM
Thank you, Subimal!

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