Get Your Premium Membership

The Old Man's Counsel

Down the road I was a-walkin', and to myself I was a-talkin', when suddenly came there comes a-stalkin', a mysterious little man; His wrinkled face, his ragged cloak, his crooked back and oak cane spoke of the travails of time which choke the sinew of the soul; 'I was like you once, young lad, Oh dreams and hopes and plans I had, that drifted off like smoke and clad, now am I in despair';
'For I like you am but a man but flesh are we, we're no more than the grains of sand and dust that span the earths four corners over'; 'But unlike me you still believe, that one day you might reach - achieve those goals, those dreams - and yet naieve are all your fantasies'; 'Though I be old and you be young, and I am spent - my soul once sung, the same song yours sings now - yet flung away is all that mist'; Spellbound I stood pondering, the the old man's counsel wondering if indeed I ought be fearing, aught that the old fool uttered.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

A comment has not been posted for this poem. Encourage a poet by being the first to comment.


Book: Shattered Sighs