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The old man felt sorry for the caged bird, but he couldn't free it; he'd given his word. His wife was so fond of its soulful song she kept it captive, and he went along. He could tell the bird felt melancholy, yet his wife loved her parakeet, Polly. And he never wanted to see her sad, for the love of his wife was all he had. She'd smile on hearing the bird sweetly sing, and he wouldn't trade that smile for anything. But his heart wanted to set the bird free, as nature had intended it to be. So, to cheer the bird up, he'd oft begin by playing a tune on his violin. For, feeling guilty, he tried to atone by serenading the bird when alone. 10/24/2022 Painting prompted Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Lisa YY Image #3

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Date: 10/29/2022 10:00:00 PM
A dilemma-filled position of the man - loving the bird, yet, not wanting it to set free for love of his wife-sake. Beautifully written. Congratulations!
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Date: 10/30/2022 9:08:00 AM
Thanks, Christuraj, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 10/25/2022 6:27:00 AM
Too good, a fav
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Date: 10/25/2022 9:13:00 AM
Thanks, Unseeking, as always, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 10/24/2022 6:35:00 PM
Think perhaps he also felt caged like the bird and longed for freedom? Violin soothed self and pet?
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Date: 10/25/2022 9:12:00 AM
Thanks, Becky, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

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