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The Ocean May - Rondelet

The ocean may be the drop behind her white noise The ocean may move Ariel's heartthrobs away, as breaking waves chance with her voice — to work down tears in salty poise, The ocean may

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Date: 6/10/2025 4:03:00 PM
Interesting lines penned. Thanks for sharing it with us. Sara K
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Date: 6/9/2025 11:21:00 AM
What a pretty rondelet
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Date: 6/8/2025 6:57:00 PM
I can almost feel the salt in her hair and hear her whizz; Paige, you are a mariner's delight!
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Date: 6/5/2025 1:48:00 AM
The sound of the ocean, its tide sings. Great poem, splendid imagery.
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Date: 6/4/2025 5:01:00 PM
love the poetic pause and mood of this gem, paige...your ocean deep! :)
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Date: 6/4/2025 4:20:00 PM
Sad little poem, though the sea carries healing vibes in her ebbs and tides
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Date: 6/4/2025 3:54:00 PM
to work down tears in salty poise…
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Date: 6/4/2025 2:46:00 PM
Whoa, I can taste her salty wash and listen as she swooshes~ Love this mariners dream Paige!
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