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The Ocean Calls Me

My heart yearns not for the mountain-way With its green of grass and tree; My heart calls out for the ocean spray And the sound of the surf-roiling free! Give me a land with its feet in the sea, Its low-swelling shoulders nearby; The voice of the waves is like music to me And the cry of the gulls is my cry. Cast me not out on your hot desert sand Where the salt-tanging airs never rest. Give me space on an ocean-washed strand With a flicker of foam on its breast. When the storm clouds build to a thundering groan And the wind whips the trees on the shore, With a rip and a roll and a deep wailing moan The swell charges in with a roar. Still, even then, with the needle-sharp spray Dancing its pain 'cross my face My soul ventures out and is swept far away On the crest of a fast ocean race. Thrilled to the core by the need to be free, Not bound by this weak mortal form, It pitches and dives and races the sea And rides on the wings of the storm. Lighter than down and stronger than steel With a knowledge as old as the sea, That this is the way my soul shall feel, Perched on the brink of eternity! Entry for Chantelle Anne Cooke's "Devotion To Ocean" Contest Won 2nd Place in the contest

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Date: 9/7/2019 4:47:00 PM
Wonderful expression of what so many feel, impressive rhyming as well.!!
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Robert L. Hinshaw
Date: 9/7/2019 6:47:00 PM
Thank you so much for your gracious comment, Linda. I cherish your support and encouragement. Best to you - Bob
Date: 9/7/2019 11:51:00 AM
This beautifully describes your deep feeling for the sea in all its moods - feelings which I surely share. A lovely piece of writing, from the heart.
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Date: 9/3/2019 5:46:00 PM
Hello Robert Hinshaw, I just read your beautiful ocean poem. It made me feel like I was by the water. have a nic evening my friend.
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Date: 9/1/2019 7:46:00 PM
This is beautiful Robert and congrats on your win! well deserved:) The ocean calls me, too!
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Date: 8/20/2019 1:39:00 PM
this is just beautiful. Nothing more to be said.
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Date: 8/16/2019 3:02:00 AM
- I knew this would be a winning poem :) - Congratulations, Bob :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/15/2019 11:43:00 PM
Robert...this is a fantastic poem. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 8/15/2019 9:50:00 PM
Robert, your feelings show in this wonderful write.Congratulation on your wonderful win! Hugs
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Date: 8/15/2019 4:06:00 PM
OMG this is beautiful Robert! I am putting it straight into my Faves! Congratulations on your wonderful win, which is First for me! I love this perfectly rhymed jewel of the sea! : ) xxoo
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Date: 8/14/2019 1:59:00 AM
Hello Bob … you've really excelled yourself with this poem Bob. It has a great flow and really great poem. It's my type of poetry, well done - Lindsay
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Date: 8/9/2019 2:41:00 PM
We live 5 mins walk from a golden beach I adore watching the sea but not being on it ... a bit of a challenge when we live on a little Island and have to get the ferry to the Uk sometime rather than planes:-) hugs Jan xx
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Robert L. Hinshaw
Date: 8/9/2019 3:01:00 PM
I enjoyed nearly 3 years of living in Bermuda (where I met my wife)while in the Air Force and being on and near the sea. I enjoyed your comment - Bob H
Date: 8/9/2019 2:22:00 PM
My Dad lives 50 yards from the Pacific Ocean. Always a treat when we go to visit. Great poem my friend.
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Robert L. Hinshaw
Date: 8/9/2019 2:59:00 PM
Your Dad is a fortunate man indeed, David, to live by and enjoy the sea. Thanks for stopping by - Bob
Date: 8/9/2019 12:58:00 PM
- An excellent poem, Bob - The emotions are many ... "The voice of the waves is like music to me ... My soul ventures out and is swept far away ...." - So beautifully written ... best wishes in the contest ... a winning poem, I bet :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) - ("La Luna Asoma ... is my devotion to ocean" :)
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