The Obsidian Plague of Midnights

In Spring there’s friendship that’s lasted through the Winter,
all those cold nights of salted drops and quilts of snow.
The obsidian plague of midnights, melancholic drapes,
but all the while the candlelight of friendship did glow.

you’d think she’s the sun -
i wax and wane in restraints
having lost my way

The flickering of her tongue as she wet our weep with wine.
O how the shadows flickered on the walls as if in mirth.
The slow burn lasted as the wind howled, the chimney choked.
Her wrinkled, waxy skin, a kin to suffering and pain.

each deep etched line spoke
a sticky web of knowing
lips barely moving

That Spring, she showed up with an armful of daffodils,
and silliness, tears stinging her neck, this honeybee.
She understood madness, and the brumal sun. Outliers
could not drink our elixir nor interlope upon our phoenix rising.

cascade of the moon
no longer afraid of dark -
white lacy curtains
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Buhagiar Avatar
April 19, 2024 at 2:43 AM
Dear Kim, this poem is brilliant in all aspects. loved the Haikus but also the longer-lined poem. Like a painter you depicted the seasons with great imagery. It's a fav for me.
Rodrigues Avatar
April 19, 2024 at 7:08 AM
I appreciate you so much, dear Victor! :)
Buehler Avatar
April 18, 2024 at 9:56 PM
Your poem tells a beautiful tale of friendship, seasons and endurance, and I love the title, Kim. This is a fave. :)
Rodrigues Avatar
April 19, 2024 at 7:07 AM
Oh, thank you so much! So glad you liked this one, sweet Evelyn!
Rodgers Avatar
April 17, 2024 at 8:18 AM
Dear Kim, I loved every word and how you sketched the seasons of friendship with the deftness of a painter. Through wintry melancholy and spring's bloom, the flame of camaraderie endured. Amidst shadows and whispers, your bond, a beacon in the obsidian nights. Like daffodils in spring, her presence brought light, dispelling the darkness. We find peace in the cadence of shared understanding, weaving tales of resilience amidst life's tempests. - Blessings Daniel
Rodrigues Avatar
April 19, 2024 at 7:06 AM
Bless you, Daniel! So gld you liked this one! I had fun writing it. Today I will be busy with cousins in town. I don’t know if I will get any writing in. :)
Rolland Avatar
April 17, 2024 at 5:52 AM
so beautiful and touching poem, friendship can be special, i love the extraordinary first verse, thanks poet
Rodrigues Avatar
April 19, 2024 at 7:03 AM
That wa the first line that got the poem rolling :) Blessings!
May Avatar
April 17, 2024 at 4:44 AM
The elixir of friendship warms the heart, Very nicely penned Kim
Rodrigues Avatar
April 19, 2024 at 7:02 AM
Thank you, Joe!
Hind Avatar
April 16, 2024 at 10:00 PM
You just amaze me. I am going to fav this! This is one of the most haunting poems I have ever read. It breathes.
Rodrigues Avatar
April 17, 2024 at 4:35 AM
Thank you so much, my friend!
Poet Avatar
April 16, 2024 at 4:41 PM
Wonderful, lyrical prose that holds the reader's attention from beginning to end, with a well-placed haiku to crown it all off. Great job, Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
April 16, 2024 at 8:05 PM
Thank you so much, Lasaad!
One Avatar
April 16, 2024 at 11:37 AM
Great prose that is very poetic and not bland like some prose can be with a fitting haiku at the end... A great read Kim..
Rodrigues Avatar
April 16, 2024 at 1:25 PM
Thank you so much! I feel encouraged! Hugs ~ Kim
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