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The Oasis- Haiku Trilogy

In the vast desert I search for love’s oasis My lips cracked and parched There In the distance The promised rest of your love I stumble forward The shimmering heat I’m buried in the hot sand You were a mirage Eileen Manassian Ghali

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 3/27/2013 6:06:00 PM
Was I, what a shame lol, Hang on, I can't be a mirage, coz you said you missed me and that made me so happy happy happy, to think I was missed, thank you Eileen, made my day that has. Another lovely write from you. Take care, Regards Richard
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/28/2013 1:40:00 PM
:) Thanks for the post. I was wondering why I hadn't read any comments from you for a bit. Glad you are alive and kicking! :) Take care.
Date: 3/24/2013 6:21:00 PM
This is so good, I was drawn into the story.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/25/2013 7:23:00 AM
Welcome!
Date: 3/24/2013 6:00:00 PM
your metaphors are so clever and brilliant! this one is a gem...
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/24/2013 6:02:00 PM
:) I've missed you, Ilene. Thanks for the visit!

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