The Notebook - Memories

Hope, reminders, try Fear, loss, love forgotten now. Memories bind lives

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Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 2/23/2013 10:18:00 AM

My Dear Sister Mandy, Hope this finds YOU and YOURS Healthy and High in the Spirit. Just dropped by to say this is still the only senryu I have read from YOU. Soup Mail Call Loving YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOU Eternal Brother...Harry

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 2/7/2013 1:19:00 PM

My Dearest Sister MANDY, Hope this Finds YOU and YOURS Healthy and High in the Spirit. I think this is the first senryu I have read by YOUR Magical Pen. Superb Quill. I enjoy reading and writing Haiku and Senryu Thank-YOU for all YOUR Soup Mails and Gracious Comments LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Brother Eternal...Harry

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire
Date: 2/7/2013 1:21:00 PM

Dear Sis, I see by Harry's comment This is YOUR first Senryu LOVE YOU...Harry

Harry Horsman

Date: 10/13/2012 9:41:00 AM

do i remember you not been able to write a Senryu? this is excellent, the juxtapose line is there, and makes the reader think about the whole poem,,, really good

Deck Fitzgerald

Date: 12/30/2011 5:44:00 AM

always enjoy your work and i read this with a broken heart , Thanks Mandy and have a great new year . Declan xxx

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 12/30/2011 5:51:00 AM

Than you Deck. I am sorry about your sadness. Happy new Year to you and yours xx

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 12/29/2011 9:05:00 PM

good choice- of movie and words. good luck in the contest :)

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 12/30/2011 1:12:00 AM

Thanks Susan tears were shed x

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/29/2011 2:05:00 PM

Oh, I did love this book and the movie..Good luck in the contest..Reads like a winner to me..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting on my work..Sara

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 12/30/2011 1:13:00 AM

Thanks Sara x

Tony Lane

Date: 12/29/2011 1:05:00 PM

Sad, sweet movie.

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 12/30/2011 1:14:00 AM

very sad lots of tears x