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The Notable Horse

I missed the deadline for the contest however never is it late to write an entry or of horses the entry below is my dedication to secretariat in my opinion is and always will be the notable horse thank you "the notable horse" it matters not no one knows it matters that all understand understand you are the best greater than those before you superior to those who follow follow but fall short of is it seen how you proudly stand is it known for you are a child a child with an exceptional soul I know and understand it all how you command how you lead lead us to a world like no other some say you were born small others say you rose from the start the start of birth to victorious reign overwhelming such thoughts of you the little horse with a huge heart a heart who said I think I can and did to date no other can take the stand for any such comparison is pale pale because no other rises as you stories live with historians and lovers they shine forever bright with followers eternally you remain the notable horse SkyWatcher 10-15-21

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Date: 10/17/2021 9:02:00 AM
This is an excellent tribute to what perhaps was/is one of the greatest racehorses of all time, Lisa. ~ Regards // paul
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Lisa Ricci
Date: 11/4/2021 4:55:00 AM
Good Morning Paul - I am very sorry for such a late response to your review and comment. I have been away from poetrysoup. Thank you very much for such wonderful comments. Truly. In my eyes Secretariat will always be the best and reign. May this day find you well. Enjoy the day and poetrysoup as well.
Date: 10/16/2021 4:15:00 PM
what a sweet beautiful tribute to that horse. I saw a movie about a small horse who also was a big winner during Depression times. I think it was different horse than this one. Not sure. Well done.
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Lisa Ricci
Date: 10/17/2021 5:04:00 AM
Good Morning Andrea - Thank you for sharing your comments and story. I think you're right that it was a different horse. I myself was young so I did not know of the greatness and magnitude of secretariat but I do with videos documentaries and more to which I could look at all day long of secretariat's greatness. Thank you again. Have a wonderful day and keep enjoying poetry and poetrysoup.
Date: 10/15/2021 10:43:00 PM
Wow, If this had entered the contest, it would have put 'the cat amongst the pigeons' it is so good.
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Lisa Ricci
Date: 10/16/2021 1:58:00 AM
hh hh hh - Good Morning with a great huge thank you. It is my turn to say wow. Truly. I am honored by your comments regarding the contest and of the entry. I will never take that for granted. I was only 11 years old in 1973 not knowing anything back then of secretariat or of his greatness but I have since then and could watch documentaries or videos all day long of him and have seen them over and over. No other shall ever be close. Have a beautiful day hh and remain safe and well. (smile)
Date: 10/15/2021 10:10:00 PM
Beautiful, soul-ful, wonderful - especially in classrooms for this is "darnnn good" at the same time, didactic. shalom, shalom Lisa and Shalom! I raise my hands (one for you & the other for Secretariat). anil
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Lisa Ricci
Date: 10/16/2021 1:49:00 AM
Top of the day to you Mr. Anil. If the entry is soulful to which I thank you the credit belongs to secretariat himself for all that he was and all that he remains to be to this day. Honestly. I gladly accept your toast and raised hands. How marvelous is that. Very. Thank you again for a beautiful review and comments. Have a wonderful day in every way and may your devices always be up and running for you. Yes, you guessed it, shalom shalom shalom. (smile)
Date: 10/15/2021 2:04:00 PM
The greatest of the great, even better than Man o' War and Kelso. Ride on in our memories, Secretariat! Thanks, Lisa
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/5/2021 5:23:00 AM
Lisa, thank you for reminding me how young I am (at heart, anyway). I believe that I was in my 20's already when Secretariat won the Triple Crown. That was 1973, if my decreasing brain cells have recalled correctly. lol. At any rate, what a specimen of beauty that horse was (and is, in our mind's memories). Take care, Gershon
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Lisa Ricci
Date: 10/16/2021 1:44:00 AM
Good Morning Gershon - It is I who thank you. Truly. Your review and comments are wonderful. I was only 11 years old thus not knowing or understanding the magnitude and greatness back then of secretariat. I have seen videos images and documentaries not to mention the winning races themselves. I could watch them all day long seeing his greatness. Have a wonderful day with poetry and thank you once again.
Date: 10/15/2021 5:50:00 AM
I am not much in horse even though it is a fine animal. Missing a contest is not the end of the world. Occasionally I find a contest, write my poem but I am not mad to enter it in contest. Blessings.
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Lisa Ricci
Date: 10/15/2021 8:25:00 AM
Thank you as always Victor - I love horses and I absolutely love secretariat his story and greatness. All of it. Contests are good for inspiration and creativity but I missed this one. Have a beautiful and peaceful night. I will see you on your page. Blessings always.
Date: 10/15/2021 4:36:00 AM
Excellent write, and Tribute. Yes, Big Red! I remember Secretariat well, having the pleasure to have seen the horse, up close, in person. Magnificent Creature. Awesome. Seen many great racehorses...but Secretariat was the greatest in my opinion. You must be from New York, Lisa. Blessings!
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Lisa Ricci
Date: 10/15/2021 5:08:00 AM
PS - Thank you once again. I have just added a photo of secretariat.
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Lisa Ricci
Date: 10/15/2021 4:52:00 AM
Good Morning Joe - Thank you so very much for such a fantastic review with comments. I am from rhode island. I was too young to remember the actual events and races of secretariat so thank goodness for actual images and videos to which I have seen over and over. Secretariat will always be the notable horse in my opinion. No other can ever be close. And yes, how blessed are you to have seen and witnessed such greatness in person. What a thrill for certain. Thank you once again. Have a wonderful day and enjoy poetrysoup. I look forward to turning to your page and work.

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