The Not So Original Monoku Challenge

Long billed pelican rufflles the morning as the lake ripples

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Suzanne Delaney

Date: 4/15/2016 10:26:00 AM

A lot of movement in so few words. I like the way ruffles alludes to feathers. Congrats on your win. SuZ

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/10/2016 10:52:00 PM

Joseph, Congrats on your Not So Original Monoku Challenge" LINDA

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/7/2016 8:11:00 PM

I agree with Laura what she says to you. ANyway, BIG congrats. Loving this one again.

Laura Leiser

Date: 4/7/2016 4:04:00 PM

Lovely words to go with the visual, Joseph. Congrats on your win (should have placed higher in my opinion...) :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/7/2016 3:28:00 PM

Your poem was awesome, creative and unique. You did a wonderful job with the topic “The Not So Original Monoku Challenge” ..Congratulations on your placement..Sara

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

Date: 4/7/2016 2:58:00 PM

Congratulations Joseph

Paul Callus

Date: 4/7/2016 1:27:00 PM

Back with congratulations, Joseph! Had big hopes for this entry! // paul

Hansteven Selfa

Date: 4/7/2016 9:27:00 AM

That's what I like about you Joseph! You write great poems in any form! Congratulations on your spectacular win! I hope to see more of your works in the future! :) -HANS