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The Not So Original Monoku

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dry land-requires fishing license Contest sponsor Timothy Hicks 04/02/2016

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Teddy Kimathi

Date: 4/13/2016 4:51:00 AM

Hi Charlie. Congrats for your placement in the contest, with this fine monoku!!! ;-)

Charlie Smith
Date: 4/13/2016 5:54:00 AM

Thanks Teddy, I appreciate your visit...

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/10/2016 10:51:00 PM

Charlie, Congrats on your Not So Original Monoku Challenge" LINDA

Charlie Smith
Date: 4/11/2016 6:24:00 AM

Thank you Linda...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/7/2016 8:10:00 PM

So cute it was!!! Congrats, Charlie (of course I was laughing WITH you)

Charlie Smith
Date: 4/7/2016 8:12:00 PM

Thank you Andrea...

Laura Leiser

Date: 4/7/2016 4:03:00 PM

Very funny...I like! Congrats on your win, Charlie :)

Charlie Smith
Date: 4/7/2016 8:11:00 PM

Thank you Dr. Dharma...

Charlie Smith
Date: 4/7/2016 4:04:00 PM

I hope you enjoyed it Laura, thank you...

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/7/2016 3:28:00 PM

Your poem was awesome, creative and unique. You did a wonderful job with the topic “The Not So Original Monoku Challenge” ..Congratulations on your placement..Sara

Charlie Smith
Date: 4/7/2016 3:32:00 PM

I do so appreciate your kindness Sara, thank you...Charlie

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

Date: 4/7/2016 2:57:00 PM

Congratulations Charlie

Charlie Smith
Date: 4/7/2016 3:31:00 PM

Thank you so much Nayda.

Paul Callus

Date: 4/7/2016 1:25:00 PM

Short but effective, Charlie! Lovely and with some wit to go with it! Congratulations! // paul

Charlie Smith
Date: 4/7/2016 2:28:00 PM

Thank you Paul...

Sandra Haight

Date: 4/7/2016 11:59:00 AM

Very clever, Charlie! Short and to the point! Congrats on your nice placement. Sandra

Charlie Smith
Date: 4/7/2016 12:03:00 PM

Thank you Sandra...

Hansteven Selfa

Date: 4/7/2016 9:27:00 AM

That's what I like about you Charlie! You write great poems in any form! Congratulations on your spectacular win! I hope to see more of your works in the future! :) -HANS

Charlie Smith
Date: 4/7/2016 10:38:00 AM

Hans you are too kind. Thank you for the encouragement...

Timothy Hicks

Date: 4/7/2016 2:54:00 AM

Probably the most succinct of them all! Mr. Peli learned the hard way ... never succeeded in stealing a single fish from the local fisherman. Congrats, Charlie, and thanks for participating in my contest!

Charlie Smith
Date: 4/7/2016 6:15:00 AM

Thank you Tim and thanks for hosting such a fun contest...